Timothy_Davidson_5490

a katana? really... that's so unmanly, can't even kill a fly with that .talk of killing a dragon . katana are girls weapon!they lack the heft to damage and they lack the weight to capitalize on a real mans strength, not to mention they are single edge oooh my days the lack of versatility in techniques. a katana is good but it's just not practical in a real fight between MEN. only boys fantasize about a kitara or kantana whatever the name is

this would have been gold but the story lacks a soul,too predictable it's just a copy and paste of authors other works . could have been better if the author took time to flesh the character and the plot. also the grammar used sound too archiac and similar to his first work and to be honest doesn't belong . when i read it's hard to grasp what the author is saying like it's a lot of fluff with no weight. so to round it up ,the plot is a solid 10,but the execution is meh at best and the pace is hurrondous

give it time ..it will grow on you

check out that epistle on this thread ,it was meant for you xd

nah what we mean is the build up to level up is terrible. great writing skills tho .it. show you are capable in constructing your script .but you lack the sight to see what make your readers tick and grasp their attention tho. the MC persona is completely undesirable in some aspect ,like his cowardly nature.or substandard intelligence and his indecisiveness . makes him obnoxious to read for one chapter.now imagine that same irritating chapter being extended to several .it gets annoying at best and intolerable at worst. sigh to make a novel is not easy so i will commend your effort and passion.but personally this isn't my cup of tea. it would have been but it's predictability and irritating parts makes it a bitter pill.

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finally someone who gets it. it's frustrating reading this art getting butcherd by the author

weak character tool right here .make me disdain this MC even more

yh I don't appreciate how set of decisions MC took to get to this point. just pretty much shows he is neither book smart or street smart. i mean with all the clues he has the least he could do was at least hunt live animals.those have souls as well as flesh. but nope he kept procrastinating, which was annoyingly a torture to us readers i had to take a break not to break my phone lol. now his abilities are exposed and there will be a fallout for that stupid decision to procrastinate. and god help me if the author use plot amour to swing it from it's natural conclusions, to something i dare say very very predictable I'm dropping..no questions asked .

my thoughts exactly. stupid and cowardly as well. this ain't character development this is character demolition