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Mzbeess_Mark

Mzbeess_Mark

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2021-11-10 JoinedGlobal
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Hehe that knight think he could rope in someone who lost interest in what his saying a while back

    Ch 70 Black Knight Order
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    Cursed Immortality
    Fantasy · Wahi
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    I think its meant to be "he could find skill that would" not couldn't

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    Unlimited Power 03: The Sinful Ruler
    Games · ExSoldierLv99
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Hello author , At the last part you wrote he has 25mp left after using 5 that means he has 30mp but the last chapter his stats showed 15mp so why the inconsistency in this mc stats?? Please try to correct all this because it's really confusing for readers like me who pick out mistakes like this

    Again, Klaus stretched his right-hand forward and focused his vision on the body of one of the dead birds. The corpse of the Black Vulture trembled and rose into the air, enveloped by the same aura as before. At that moment, Klaus looked at the MP bar on his HUD and noticed that the MP had dropped only five points, leaving twenty-five remaining.
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    Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player
    Games · NandoFalske
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Why does his status arrangements change everytime he check's it

    Ch 15 Stealth Tactics
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    Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player
    Games · NandoFalske
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    The switch between shadow cat and shadow gatun was kinda annoying

    Ch 14 Shadowcat
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    Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player
    Games · NandoFalske
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Sorry i think it's meant to be "monitoring" instead of "mentioning"

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    Unlimited Power 03: The Sinful Ruler
    Games · ExSoldierLv99
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Hey author, you wrote "status - 00" but didn't he get status point from learning bash, barrier and the other skill so it shouldn't be 00

    Ch 7 Cooperation (2)
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    Unlimited Power 03: The Sinful Ruler
    Games · ExSoldierLv99
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Loving the story so far but author can you put a '' " when there is an announcement or alert from the game system. It's kinda difficult for people if you don't add the notations to differentiate when his thinking or when talking or when there are system alerts pls do something about it thank you ☺

    Ch 3 First mission (2)
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    Unlimited Power 03: The Sinful Ruler
    Games · ExSoldierLv99
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Yes, give in to the darkness 😈

    Ch 11 Nightmares
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    Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    I love this novel so far but this arc is just filled with filler and boring memories. Although it's to complete the story but it's just getting stretched for me 😞😞

    Ch 610 Sia [15]: Alone
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    Divine Path System
    Fantasy · _Transcendent
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Ain't varian supposed to report his finding's and look for help instead of trying to take responsibility for everything ??

    Ch 382 The Secret [2]
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    Divine Path System
    Fantasy · _Transcendent
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Man why do we have to get a wimpy mc (•ิ_•ิ)? Dude has been trained for more than 10yrs of simulation and when he see the real thing he froze nd got cold feet 😑

    Ch 6 The First Time
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    The World's Game: The Legendary Dual Class Adventurer
    Fantasy · _chomps
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Hhmm being vague with the amount of cash the mc has is kinda annoying. You say his sold his gil but not a specific amount just like the price of his house which is also vague. It's like saying he has money but not enough money which is like you are just teasing me author 😤😤

    Ch 167 The Merchant
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    MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
    Games · MiuNovels
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Replied to ApexPen

    I just reread chapter 162 but didn't see him mentioning the aspect but i can still remember he got that power during his battle against a monster when his mind went beyond the boundary of a normal human. So what exact chapter can i get him mentioning it please author

    Ch 235 Blaspheming the Unspoken Rule
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    Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
    Games · ApexPen
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    illusion magic not illustration

    Illustration magic could be very lethal if the target does not have good mental fortitude.
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    Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer
    Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Enhanced senses not scene.

    I will have to enhance my scenes with the flowing <Energy> inside me and to do that, I will have to gain more control over my body.
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    Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer
    Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    This was meant to be written as "stat drop by half" and not "from half ".

    [If you aren't exposed to light enough, all your stats will drop from half.]
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    My Angelic System
    Fantasy · Karme
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    I just gotta ask something that is on mind rn, is the mc still live streaming while conversing with that girl??

    Ch 215 The Monstrous Top Contenders
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    Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
    Games · ApexPen
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Wow that's a new one, learning to control mana by milking a cow 😂😂

    Ch 29 Ahh! The Milk Is So Thick!
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    Guardian Of The End
    Fantasy · BlackFlamer
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  • Mzbeess_Mark
    Mzbeess_Mark1yr
    Commented

    Hehe she trying her best to get the mc but dude's eye are only for asna so he ain't seeing her more than just a friend 😂

    Ch 819 Three Vs Three Tournament.
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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