Trevor_Kapeen

Ok so the reason for the great review. Pulls you into the story straight away Leaves you wanting to know more Well written so far Has the making of an exceptional novel. Overall highly recommend and can’t wait till more chapters come out

Maybe keep the paragraphs together it gets a bit annoying to read otherwise

No don’t let it happen

shouldn't she have forgotten they existed?

overall not a bad book, but I didn't come to read about how this dude just straight up starts banging straight away. A bit more in depth world background would have been better than those first 10 chapters

can confirm

this chapter and what you did for the people who have been supporting you is deadset awesome. such a great thing to do

I think it's a very unique take on the system genre, it's actually great to see a novel where the mc is not ridiculously overpowered with a system straight off the bat which in turn helps set the premise for these big built up challenges and battles that the mc has during the course of the novel. There is some grammatical errors but you can for the most part understand what the author means when reading so it's not to difficult to grasp. Overall I believe this novel is worth the read so far.

deduction card with martial arts practice card?

what? not an 80% to 90% chance?