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no one cares

uhm u made a mistake its in other words, not in order words

your word choice is sometimes weird, but overall good story

can a mod pls annouce something pls

can you maybe give us a date when u will return PLS[img=recommend]

whats the source

where?

XIE pls my addiction cant take this anymore, we need a new chapter plssssss, hope u oki

XIE we are pantiently waiting for your return

What happend with th writing quality???

holy necromancer lux von ainsworht????

pls stop changing the I pov its sooooo confusing

stop switching the pov all the time its getting confusing

XIE its been 2 weeks, pls update we need u!!!!

his inner strength surged, not he's inner strength surged

you are making several grammar mistakes, try re-reading your work, or let someone else do that

As he heard her, he took if his shirt and looked at his body. there is a mistake in this sentence its: he took off his shirt

shifted not sifted

soldiers not shoulders