I dont like the MC, he is like the real Lufy ... an ideot. Like he dont want tell his gradpa what he learned ...WHY his grandpa is the most "dont care" charakter in the manga .. when lufy made a mess in impeldown he just laughts. And what i dislike the most is that now he has a dumb pet-sidekick like a disney princess.

Its so slow you can make 1 chapter out of the first 10 and sometimes it lacks expression or just feels kinda numb... and on top wen something happens it feels forced

Like every asian novel ever. 1) Mc was a virgin in last live. Dont know why this is impotant to mention he gets every girl anyway 2) hides his strength even from his PARENTS. Does he fear what his parents will to if they find out? 3) women fall in love as soon as they see him or he just taks to them ... remember he spend both his lives as a virgin

Like pea_one said: not gonna lie turned out to be a let down for me but was expecting something good but all it ended up being cringey and kinda of lame and just a joke it's like going to a a water park that turns out to be a moldy pond

The MC starts dumb and gets dumber. If you have the fantasy to f*** yourself thats the novel for you. Personal i dislike the MC from the first sentence in the first chapter

Why Gatcha? Just give then MC to summen things or create things and stop with the "its random, but not realy because its allways what he wants". Timeline shit 3 wishes: 1 Gatcha 2 personality change 3 born al Cul Bosen 4 born in Marvel 5 odins Brother 6 look like Poseidon The first chapter and he breaks his own rules

The MC only hides behind a woman, who was drugt to love him and gifts him evrything ... materials, level, armor, protektion .... The MC has 2 skills being useless und leeching of the woman.