i have mistakes from the novel after reading 3 chapters. Some of the errors i found are:
* Grammatical errors
* Unclear Sentences
* Spelling Mistakes
* some paragraph of text longer than others
Ch 4 Chapter 4: Angry Tang San
Douluo Dalu: Stealing the Ten Thousand Realms System
who ever wrote mess up big time, because there is a lot mistakes from the chapters. some of the mistake spacing for words, uncompleted sentence and broken sentences, and well as grammatical errors. I hope these will be fixed soon.
Where are the chapters mr author ?
It has been almost 3 years now, what is going on.
This book has been deleted.
Tygar_Bhard11mth
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The overall structural plan and world building as well as the character development has been well written. Has a nice storyline with introduction of new characters.