Continue the story, everyone makes mistakes when they start and one of the best things is watching as a writer improves and comes into their own. Seriously, this story has major potential!

This story was hilarious, and had the right amount of seriousness to hilarity that you'd struggle to find elsewhere. 10/10 would read again!

I'm loving this.

I used to read HOTD stories when I was younger so finding this one was a serious treat. The main character is likeable and romance between the characters (though early) is fluid. Looking forwards to reading more of this!

This is blatant word padding. there was no need for it and it's soured my thoughts about the rest of the story.

if I still had a power stone I'd give it to you. I don't usually read female OC stories especially in DxD but you've got me hooked!