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RichLemon2yrReplied to OnedAr15Yep. Lady almost got herself a felony. Haha
Hudson : - You really wanted to move to a mansion that we don't yet have the ownership?- RichLemon2yrCommented
Oooh, I want to know what a sex trafficker needs with the narrator.
Especially not at this time - When he needs her the most. - RichLemon2yrCommented
Did he walk around her? Did she roll over? I'm just curious to how she saw him coming for her when the gun is pressed against her back.
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Oh no... dead?
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Mental image:
Cathy feels the ground shake beneath her as Luigi busts the door wide open. - RichLemon2yrCommented
Luigi has finally gone off the deep end. I knew it would come to this.
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Were you able to salvage anything!? :O
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Did you copy-paste this from somewhere? hrmmmm You could say that you.... COPY-PASTA'D IT ... crickets.... Yes, I know what a copypasta is
A speedrun is a play-through of a video game or a selected part of it (such as a single level), performed to complete it as quickly as possible. While all speedruns aim for quick completion, sometimes players impose additional goals or limitations, such as collecting all key items or playing blindfolded. - RichLemon2yrCommented
What did this do to your computer!? I want to know! Did you experience anything weird when you restarted?
It should be named game crasher, not EXE. - RichLemon2yrCommented
I know you're talking about Alex, but I had this mental image of turning around and seeing the Flying Spaghetti Monster (all hail)
As I turned to see the Creepysta it was right behind me!! - RichLemon2yrCommented
Oooh, I want a Glitchy Grimoire!
The chest contained iron armour and tools with some crazy glitching book and some apples. - RichLemon2yrCommented
Yeah, I feel like this dialogue between Laura, Kelvin, and the mother could be a bit snappier.
"I'm off now, mum. Bye, Kelvin. See you after school". - RichLemon2yrCommented
It's more interesting to read when only the important bits of dialogue are included. Asking someone how they're doing does little to interest me as a reader unless there's subtext.
"Good morning, honey. Hope you had a good night?" - RichLemon2yrCommented
"Queried" is such a good word. I just like to say it.
"Oh, I should have known. Causing trouble again?", she queried with a smile, holding Kelvin's chin. - RichLemon2yrCommented
"You made me drop my croissant!"
"Hey, easy, why are you running around like that? You almost caused the milk to spill. Who is after..." - RichLemon2yrCommented
Oh, I 100% would've followed her.
Part of me wants to demand who she is, but my better judgment tells me not to follow her; that's not what I'm here for. Stranger or not, the flowers are always welcomed. My mind is elsewhere, so I wouldn't even know what to ask. My gaze already drifts to the bold letters carved into the slab of stone: "Here Lies The Kita Family: James Kita, Heather Kita, and Harry Kita. May They Find Eternal Peace." - RichLemon2yrCommented
There's some verb tense inconsistency here.
People stopped grieving here years ago, which made her evidently strange. She hasn't turned to acknowledge me yet, but it feels like she has eyes on the back of her head judging me. The rain doesn't even make any attempt to drag down her dress either, as it stays frilled and immaculate. I was about to tap her on the shoulder when she turned heel and started to walk away. - RichLemon2yrCommented
Who can it be? I'm excited.
As soon as I reach my family's grave, I see a woman dressed in a mourning dress, laying flowers for my family. Despite the veil covering her face and rain obscuring my sight, I could make out her slender and delicate body, which was complemented by her milky pale skin. Yet, I don't have to be a superstitious person to feel uneasy about her. - RichLemon2yrCommented
I read, "Came out as a Marine," and I'm like, "Good for Ashley!"
Well, except for Jane. It'd be improper to call my boss just a "coworker" unless I'm looking for a pay cut. She's a twenty-eight-year-old woman who came out of the Marines and established our company two years ago. How Jane and Ashley came to know each other is an enigma, which I've yet to crack. - RichLemon2yrCommented
Wait, I thought he was grateful to Ashley now and it was only initially, when he was suicidal, that he didn't like her.
Paul and Jane, an unforgettable pairing, which brings a torrent of trouble together. By themselves, they're just barely as tolerable as Ashley. I know they have good intentions, but it doesn't help that they mix like water and oil. To make it worse, the only reason I know them is that they're my coworkers.