Rya_kishou

it's the name of my actual cat haha :")

xiaogua so wholesome T_T soft boy

Omg a thousand years...poor baby T_T

I really love these kinda stories, ig it's the reason why I keep up with who made me a princess and similar novels. I like the Protagonist alot and from the first chapter I got the impression that the guy friend she talked to in school is the author of the novel she read. He seems like a nice dude ,I wonder if he gets reincarnated into the prince 🤔 overall story and flow go smooth and well and I enjoyed reading it so far. I can empathize with the MC alot. I hope she gets the happiness she deserves. I will continue reading!♡ Hopefully author-nim would want to fellowly support each other 🥺💕 keep doing ♡

Im glad you liked it!😭🙏 thank you!♡

good luck with contest! I got no PS on me atm as I currently already voted on another persons work x.x But good luck! ♡

oh no worries i'm not sad! ik I need to improve so it's fine i'm happy for the constructive criticism uwu ♡ and ganba! you can do it 💕

It's definitely a different kind of zombie story. I like the idea and the characters were interesting too. I was a little disappointed that MC got beat up for 3 days at the beginning by his comrades...it gave this typical ' MC is being bullied and later in the plot gains everyones trust and respect ' trope. Not saying It's bad, just thought it was a shame that these Teens couldn't befriend each other, given the situation but hey I guess Teens will be Teens. Something that did bother me a little was the grammar, while spelling was all fine, the grammar lacked a bit. Often the author repeated himself in the same sentence to explain the same Action, it's nothing bad, it just Interrupts the reading slow a little. In the end it's nothing to get too upset about, as the plot and Story was still understandable and easy to comprehend. Will continue reading to see how it's going. Overall a rating of 4.6 isn't bad imo.

ahh thank you! I'm glad you enjoy the plot T_T I still have to send the first 3 chapters to my Editor for spell/grammar checking, I got him in the boat with the 4th chapter so 😔 👉👈 meaning to say; ik my grammar isn't top notch as english is only my third language but I got help already for it >~<

ok I will go over it tomorrow ,it's already past 4am and I gotta get some sleep 😅💀 I can't spell check everything tho and I can't promise that it will be perfect ,I myself have an Editor after all. I would do worse without him. So don't expect too much from me >~< now good night ♡