James_Fennell

"Supernatural methods" should most DEFINITELY be "Parahuman methods".

Yeah, the physical personification of F=MxA isn't something you'd want to stand in front of. Especially when you're looking at something potentially planetary in scope. Heh, I'm happy to see Mudrock finally getting her shounen upgrade!

It's a wish fulfilment isekai, yes. But it's an interestingly implemented wish fulfilment isekai. I like the idea for MC's powerset, and the author has done a good job of showing the different characters' personalities. And I always enjoy a DxD story which gives humanity a chance to stand on its own. The only real negative is that there are some glaring grammatical mistakes and a few instances where the MC's logic falls apart from one sentence to the next, contradicting themself. Thankfully that last doesn't happen too often.

And yet that's what he just got through saying he did here...

I don't know... For me, this reminds me of the Narrator from "Darkest Dungeon".

"knife"? I'm pretty sure he used a gun... Also, cold dude.

The MC is an ass, and that's okay. Sometimes it's nice relax with a good story about a character who isn't a white knight. Plus, while he certainly isn't the best of people, at the very least he isn't a monster. In short, he's a pretty normal dude. I'm enjoying thinking about how things will progress in the future.

You seem to have duplicated the words "to Canon"

I've loved reading this fic. Yes, there are a few problems with typos, but they aren't so bad that the fic becomes unreadable. And the MC is just so entertaining to watch. He's powerful and intelligent, but not to mary sue levels. He actually does struggle throughout. Though that is mostly confined to the political arena as fighting hasn't really been a focus. The only... odd thing, is how the dialogue is written like a screenplay. With characters' names prefacing their words. It took a bit to get used to that, but otherwise this has been enjoyable. Here's hoping the author pics this back up.

Careful with this story. A lot of people seem to enjoy it, and that's fine. The problem is that I saw so many glowing reviews that I went into this thinking it would be a good read... And it might be plot-wise. But for anyone with OCD, or who edit things regularly? This will be pure hell. Typos are everywhere, and even after all this time there has been no effort made at fixing them.