Ryan_Ashari

what i know shank found by Roger as baby when he left God Valley. it's mess

LoL Luffy already eaten devil

it's good story, writing got better every update and stable chapter every week, appreciate bro

the red devil successor

I don't know when translation mess up 👎

Grammar mess up sometimes he sometimes she, pokemon name mess too. make me lost interest in reading.

it's good story overall 4.6/5 for me, good enough for reading.

good luck, I enjoyed this fanfic

for me it's good enough

story plot is not bad but better but name and item and jutsu kinda confusing if you good English and understand all plot comic including Characters name, item name jutsu nama then go read but if not don't waste read it it's confusing it would make you dizzy lol 😂