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Storm202311hReplied to dminor101I don’t think he’s got enough of the griffindoor bloodline to qualify to use it as it’s a bloodline thing
One of his main focuses was progressing with the Knight Breathing Technique. He had found the perfect place for his training deep within the Forbidden Forest. There, he set up a new practice dummy. The forest creatures no longer posed a threat to him, making it an ideal spot for his training. Practicing in the tranquility of nature proved to be very beneficial for Harry, enhancing his concentration and peace of mind. This secluded spot also gave him the privacy he needed for his sword practice, away from the eyes of other students and professors, allowing him to train undisturbed.- Storm202311hCommented
Who?
Guess, I have that weird God to thank. - Storm202321hCommented
If he has this thought then he should check for spells used on him
Bearclaw sat at this desk considering everything he had just been told and a bead of sweat ran down his forehead. Once this got out, he and his family would probably be executed under Goblin law for causing such a tremendous loss to Gringotts. - Storm202321hCommented
He cant do that because he has no say to the potter family and it would be considered line theft to try, he can only push and say Harry isn’t sure and be vague but he can’t put right say this
Bearclaw calmly said "You were sent a letter on your eleventh birthday detailing everything about your accounts. We received a letter from your magical guardian stating that you declined to take responsibility for your family at that time and would reconsider the issue when you were seventeen." - Storm202321hCommented
That clan has different levels of power in it too so 11 would only equal to the weakest of them soooooo🤷♂️
"Ding!!! To the host's information, If any of his stats reached 11, he would be in the same league as the Otsutsuki Clan, even without possessing Rinnegan or other dojutsu or kekkai genkai. Even though it is rare, humans can achieve such a level, even if it is temporally. And it might have dire consequences for the human body. Ding!!!" - Storm202322hCommented
No they don’t.
Jiraiya only nodded before leaving. Hiruzen sat down as his nerves were all over the place in the past ten minutes. Lighting up his pipe, Hiruzen looked up at his new taijutsu skill. He was surprised that Shurikenjutsu fell under the Taijutsu tree. From that, he concluded that all weapons mastery fell under Taijutsu skill. But what did advance mean? - Storm202322hCommented
That’s not taijutsu, taijutsu is basically hand to hand combat not weapons
Taijutsu skills: Shurikenjutsu (advanced level). - Storm202322hReplied to Mokillerx7
Probably because he can learn to do that now that he has the other two
I'll choose Bogan, Ashla, Battle Meditation, Force Vision Eye and I think the last one will be Cosmic Force Control. - Storm20231dCommented
What’s with the symbols all the time?
"A whaâ€"?" he asks dumbly. - Storm20231dCommented
Yea this makes no sense, he has no guardian anymore because he’s emancipated and is an adult now so you making it so he can’t get his lordship and wealth is kinda forced and very very illogical. He has the full rights of an adult and you can’t just say he doesn’t when he does dude, you can say the goblin simply refuses but then he can get it out that dumbles is trying line theft. But this is bs and stupidly makes zero sense.
Ch 12 Denied Inheritance - Storm20231dCommented
It’s already done dude, there’s no mending things when they don’t consist of what the universe already had happen.
I read the comments and will admit that I did go off plot and created lots of loopholes but I will try to mend it. The only reason I got supernatural in this book is for it to create a ending that I have been having in my mind and the only way I saw to bring it into play is to have a part of supernatural as teen wolf just have shifters so then the ending will be confusing to many people and just to put it out there this Fic is just a test run as I have little writing experience and am trying to build on it - Storm20231dCommented
He better make them suffer the consequences or this is some bs
"I hope you can show a big heart and forgive these jonin; they didn't do this out of hate for you, I know you understand that" - Storm20231dCommented
Okay I’m honestly at a loss so far, this is interesting and has potential but there’s some stuff that’s confusing. First off the first chapter stiles said he awoke future knowledge of what’s coming and then he started working out and ever since the hes acted oblivious to the supernatural stuff like it never happened. Then there’s the fact he wasn’t bitten by an alpha or anything and just randomly woke up with abs and there was no explanation to that. Then finally there’s the issue where you have stiles and Allison getting together way to fast that it seems forced, they met before school began and then by the time school was over that same day they started dating and throwing themselves at each other, it just seems forced and a waste to do that and ruin it. All In all this is interesting but it’s got some stuff that need fixing and explaining.
Ch 3 Chapter 3 - Storm20232dReplied to iLeech
Also not true, it’s been speculated the creator of dragon ball just forgot to give them tails and so he just kept with it at that point. 🤷♂️
However, Bulma knowing the danger had it surgically removed from Trunks and I can only guess that Chi-chi also had it removed from Goten - Storm20232dReplied to mshade656
Would’ve preferred dark read ninja clothes with orange trim or something along those lines to honor his family’s red hair
2- Originally, many people didn't like that I just had Naruto abandon his orange clothing, so I just changed it to Naruto can just get any material, chakra dye it into orange. Also, I added a canon explanation to wave off the trope of Naruto wearing orange because if you think about it, Kakashi's white hair, Sakura's pink hair, Kisame's fish body, etc., all kind of stand out in a forest. To not throw shade at Naruto for wearing orange, I just connected it with transformation jutsu since, as explained before, it's the control of reflecting and refraction of light, so it doesn't matter if Naruto is wearing a neon red sign saying "I am here," he can hide pretty fine in a forest. Also, I added the quirk that transformation jutsu doesn't mimic voices as to give the jutsu a logical limitation. - Storm20232dCommented
He better cripple that guy
"Senior Sister, where's Senior Brother Han? Take me to him," Lin Xiu said in a deep voice. - Storm20232dCommented
Quick question. Wouldn’t him successfully implanting hashirama cells into himself fix his eye problem completely due to how op the cells healing properties are? (Not to mention the wood release added on top and he can fight the tailed beasts and he will gain tons of chakra that make it so he could spam the family sword style and jutsus without problem)
After alleviating the problem of the Sharingan in his left eye, Kakashi decided to enhance some abilities for himself!