I like how you don't spoil the pov and allow us to guess, it will make it easier for you to leave us with a twist ending, and trying to figure out the pov keeps me intrigued. I highly recommend this story!

Bro y is your background pixelized, you're so broke you couldn't afford a free high quality background. I don't wanna hear nun from u. And im already famous, I got Drake in my DMs tryna put ice on my wrist bro you dont know nun bout me. Justin Bieber is my big bro, Trippie Redd is my cousin, and YoungBoy is my brother, I'll really pull up to your crib wit my gang if u keep talking smack

Its crazy to think this story might not gain popularity despite how great it is. I recently came upon this after searching through countless stories about the cliché vampire love trend. I hope you make it, really, this is a good one.

Ayo y u tryna beef wit an old lady, if you want smoke, press me and imma give it to you. Yo aint bout dat life for real, u talking mad slick wit yo big neck having ahhh boii.

Boi y u talkin all dat smack, he lives all the way in Japan. You bouta catch a flight then catch dem hands. And u mad cuz nobody liked pokemon cards, yo-gi-yo is where its at home slice.