So far the story is great, I like how you give the readers an outlook from many perspectives, it keeps my interest up and stops me from getting bored, that was an excellent strategy on ur part. Nice work!

I am completely and utterly disappointed in you, young man. That is most certainly NOT how you should speak to others, you need to treat people the way YOU want to be treated. If you have nothing nice to say, do not say anything at all. I am afraid I must inform your parents about this unacceptable behavior you have displayed here today. However, since I am in a good mood tonight, I will let you off with a warning this one instance, but if this is to happen once more, the authorities will be alerted.

I'm hooked! I haven't read in a long time, ever since COVID, I had been stressed in finding new jobs to pay my rent and bills. I have four kids and I'm a single mother, I can't remember the last time I had the chance to sit down and enjoy reading a good story. This was an excellent find and for those wondering if this story is worth your tie or not, I highly recommend this, you won't be disappointed!! Don't hesitate and read read READ! I genuinely appreciate the time and effort you put into this fantastic story, great job!