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So much untapped potential. However, it's still an enjoyable read with interesting premises. Mc's personality and temperament is quite good, mature and reasonable, not a whining little bastard. The MC is smart in a few ways, not exactly an idiot, but dumb in several ways, especially in terms of creativity. The system is heavily underutilized. His and his disciples strengths and talents aren't applied to their fullest potential, having very low synergies. In addition, some of the returned rewards are questionable, especially the techniques, and I figured they are just for the plot's convenient. If the returned rewards are just (a random number)fold of the given rewards, the story would be much more interesting, as the MC has to figure out himself which technique he should give to his disciples to get a technique with desirable effects. Lastly, the story progression is kinda too fast for my taste. In short, in my opinion, the novel is interesting enough and it's enjoyable, the MC is not annoying. However, the creativity is really underwhelming, in some cases, extremely glaring, making those moments mildly frustrating, and the pace is too fast.

What if they have kids in this space?? They could've made dozens of talented individuals. Then, by accepting them as disciples, he could also use power infusing. By the end of the 700th year, not only could he possibly have become a peak unity realm expert, he would also have a bunch of Unity realm descendants, stronger than his disciples.🤔🤯😏👌

If only he could accept Xia as a disciple...problem solved.

When did he even get this low grade immortal sword art?

I hope he doesn't forget about the Phoenix nirvana technique.

Didn't he have the "Flame Dragon Divine Spear Break", another low grade immortal rank spear technique? It sounds far more suitable for her, additionally, the technique was also acquired from giving her the previously high grade heaven rank technique, Azure dragon twelve forms, which should have more similarities, and therefore, easier to cultivate.

Didn't his appearance change drastically? How come they recognized him?

Now that I think about it, what if his original world was unlike earth, and people could train to be insanely strong? Cause that's the only way this could make sense.

At first, my thought was similar to yours. But then, I realized that the sentence: "Peter, the chief knight to your father and your two brothers" aren't referring to "Peter, the chief knight to your father" , and "your two brothers". Instead, it's "Peter" , the chief chief knight to your father and your two brothers (Afterall, his brothers, like his father, were the previous lords, so Peter had also served them as their chief knight during their reign too.)

Did that programmer have something against him? He actually named the character after the creator of the game himself😂