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Man, I thought this story went on an indefinite hiatus, like many others. I'm glad that's not the case. As always, great work; keep it up.

Why do so many of you spastic twats leave these worthless five-star reviews? You're supposed to provide justificatiton for the rating you give; instead, you treat this as your personal suggestion box.

Another great chapter of a great story. I cannot wait to see Kairo grow into a warrior that makes her mother shed tears of pride. Keep up the great work!

This is truly a hidden gem--one unfortunately buried underneath the sea of poorly-translated Chinese slop and harem garbage on this site. While our MC, Knox, isn't a beacon of purity and innocence like Goku, nor is he an insufferable Mr McEdgeLord who goes on long-winded, philosophical rants. You see, he's a rather straightforward character; his main motivation is to see numbers continue go up and become the most powerful in the universe. Moreover, his current goal is to get strong enough to free his enslaved self from the shackles of the Frieza Force. The simplicity of Knox's character is, by no means, a bad thing. Goku, too, isn't some kind of multilayered character, yet we're invested in his adventures and growth. Point is, for a Dragon Ball story, Knox has the qualities--his smarts and goal-orientated attitude--that makes him work well enough as the protagonist. The worst thing your MC can be annoying, and, up to where I've read, he isn't that. Anyway, the system that accompanies Knox throughout his journey is interesting and, naturally, compliments his grind mindset very well. For starters, there are the only 3 stats to keep track of: BODY, MIND and SOUL. Knox is only able to increase his base stats through leveling up, for which he must meet certain requirements (e.g. Kill an opponent with X power level). Next, there are the multipliers, which are applied to the base stats. To increase the multiplier for, say, the MIND stat, he has to rank up its respective skills (Meditation, for instance). It seems like he only gains a +1 per rank-up for any skills he learned/created; you can easily imagine how this quickly snowballs into massive increases in PL. The inhabitants of Universe 7 and beyond should count their lucky stars, for Knox would've been an utter monster if he was a Saiyan alongside having this system. There are, of course, the aforementioned skills and also traits, but I've been yapping for long enough, so I'll skip over them. All in all, this story has the potential to easily become one of the best pieces of Dragon Ball fanfiction on Webnovel. Well-deserving of the powerstones and the 5-star rating, in my eyes. Kudos to you, dear author. I eagerly await the next chapters!

It has been quite a while since I last read a Dragon Ball fic this good. Take pride in that, author. Keep up the incredible work, as well as th3 impressive update schedule!

Kairo when he's finally able to fight Frieza with his Active Skill:

Any Gamer-esque/System-based progression is naturally going to fit in the world of Dragon Ball, which is all about the grind. Also, this is not translated Chinese slop, so this is already puts the rating at 5 stars. Kudos to you, author. Keep up the good work!

If this is slop, what does that make the other dogshit on this site?