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Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to Mrnoob5089- Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to TheDudeThatReads
20 people beg to differ just in this review, I'm pretty sure that there are two or three more enlightened reviews so, yeah, we did, you just like trash and that's okay. It's not like you can't read it because it isn't good. I will just put you into the category of MGA fans in my heart, which is synonymous to braindead for me.
- Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to Spartan_001
Bruh, she looks like Rock Lee real life if he as a female
Love interest if what is finally written is: Akira Shimazu - Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to ThanatosGreekGod
He literally starts saying that likability is relative, so there's no need to come to my review and say shit, he could just go and do his, because, I didn't like it and that's what my OP is saying. So there's no point in making his comment. Of course, if you had two braincells working, you could have realized that.
- Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to hero4hire
Just re-read your own answer and consider it yourself, does it look like death? Yes? No? If it looks like death, he can escape, if it doesn't, he will just live normally
* The ability to voluntarily 'die' and trigger your next reincarnation. Intended for use in situations such as being trapped in an inescapable void, buried underneath a collapsed mountain, being devoured alive for eternity in an Elder God's stomach, locked in temporal stasis, trapped in an inescapable time loop, etc. This ability will never activate under any circumstances unless you genuinely and of your own free will want it to, but can be activated 'subconsciously' regardless of how incapacitated you are. - Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to funmaxwell
I don't have to consider anything cause if you're going with tech as the main ability there's really no need to waste time reading it cause that's the worst possible idea for a SW fanfic. The wish fulfilment factor isn't there. Also it's borderline as unlikable as being a transmigrator and telling people about it in the story.
I suggested the Galaxy far far away ... Star Wars. And it was accepted actually. Sadly, I was told that there was no guarantee that I would be Force-sensitive and also not whether I would be strong in the Force. I was allowed to make one wish though. I was about to wish for powerful Force sensitivity but then stopped. No matter how much I wanted that, there was no guarantee I had that I would even make it long in life and use that talent to become powerful. - Daoist2ndArcher1mthPosted
The protagonist is unlikable and another one of those kinds of Immortals without ambitions or personality who live a miserable life and where no matter what happens you can tell from the start that the ending will probably be very bad, not to mention the overall development. Also there's way too much being told and nothing happening.
- Daoist2ndArcher1mthCommented
Disgusting
At first, I didn't want to marry anyone and thought that I was better suited as a lone wolf. But that changed when I met my wife. Names aren't something we had or used but there were some sounds that we used instead. Each member had a specific sound that was their name if you will. When I saw her, I thought that I had never seen anyone as pretty in my two lives. I can still remember it as if it happened today. I loved everything about her. I loved her smell, her gait, how she held herself, how she looked and especially her smile. When she smiled, the sun shone more brightly. - Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to hero4hire
Have you not understood yet that this immortality is above all concepts? A timeloop is in this case just another form of death, and therefore, he can escape it.
* The ability to voluntarily 'die' and trigger your next reincarnation. Intended for use in situations such as being trapped in an inescapable void, buried underneath a collapsed mountain, being devoured alive for eternity in an Elder God's stomach, locked in temporal stasis, trapped in an inescapable time loop, etc. This ability will never activate under any circumstances unless you genuinely and of your own free will want it to, but can be activated 'subconsciously' regardless of how incapacitated you are. - Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to Ayden12g
Racial advantage doesn't matter once your mastery of the force reaches a certain point
* An eternal soul, that cannot be trapped, bound, owned, permanently harmed, or eliminated by any power short of the Supreme Being. If you are ever destroyed by any means, up to and including being retroactively erased from having ever existed, you will reincarnate somewhere else and regain your memories and abilities in early childhood. Barring other factors you will reincarnate on the inhabitable world closest to where you 'died' as a healthy newborn of the closest equivalent to the race you 'died' as, usually the same one in both cases. If the entire universe is unavailable to reincarnate in then you will reincarnate in a nearby universe. - Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to funmaxwell
It's not, have you seen anything from EU? even the best tech was built with the force as the basis.
I suggested the Galaxy far far away ... Star Wars. And it was accepted actually. Sadly, I was told that there was no guarantee that I would be Force-sensitive and also not whether I would be strong in the Force. I was allowed to make one wish though. I was about to wish for powerful Force sensitivity but then stopped. No matter how much I wanted that, there was no guarantee I had that I would even make it long in life and use that talent to become powerful. - Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to DonaldSenju
Thankfully our boy is too much of a genius, the kind that can move mountains with his own efforts
"So, does that mean you also have a defect bad enough to put you in Class D?" she asks, curious about my answer. - Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to DonaldSenju
My guess is that he has some condition, a medical one that makes him have to eat sugary food often
"I have an unusual appetite for chocolate today, so I might choose the triple chocolate cake. But the chocolate lava cake is also tempting," I mutter to myself, weighing my options. Kikyo has not even opened her menu yet. - Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to BludKratz
He did kick light a couple of meters away from him so it probably checks out
I received a few messages as I got crouched in the corner of my bed. They were from Kushida, the only classmate who had my number. I glanced at the messages and replied briefly, but I did not care much for texting. I stayed up most of the night, eating sweets. I had trouble sleeping in this unfamiliar environment. As morning came, I prepared for class and exited my dorm, especially early. I had business to attend to, after all. - Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to Zombie_Toshiro
truly the goat
I bring my finger to my lips and begin to speak. "In the moments I chose to sit, there were incidental advantages, but as the need arose for the elderly lady to occupy a seat, those advantages dissipated. Thus, I had reasons to relinquish my seat." My initial purpose for sitting was rooted in the desire to quietly observe the bus's dynamics without unnecessary movement. However, as my destination approached, the need to continue sitting weakened. Opting to stand without apparent cause would seem strange, and the elderly lady's presence provided a convenient opportunity to stand while maintaining the semblance of a benevolent gesture. - Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to Time_walker
Nah, if it was him at this time, he would be kicking someone while barefoot and eating cake in the process.
As Kushida exited the bus, I watched her. "There is certainly something peculiar about her," I whispered as I exited the bus. - Daoist2ndArcher1mthCommented
Eru-diction? Eru-tic? Or perhaps you would prefer... eru-ption?
Kushida? She is a strange girl; most would avoid making a show like her, especially on the first day of class, "I appreciate the sentiment, Kushida," I say and proceed to chew on the hard candy in my mouth, "as for me you can call me Eru." - Daoist2ndArcher1mthReplied to DarlingBestBoyEver
- Daoist2ndArcher2yrReplied to Darkstel
He's still naive and innocent in regards to how this world works, but he will soon learn of how violent it actually is and how stupid it was for him to act like that, I wanted Saito to be more resistant to his forced labor situation, but also learn the darker aspects of this world, I'll be using real-life examples of how slaves were punished in the story to make him wake to reality, while also revealing that slavery is a common thing in this world. Thanks to my modifications of the magic system though, Saito won't be so defenseless in the future as he starts to learn how to use his runic name, and the new feature of the runic name system, evolution.
Ch 4 Insulting a noble 2/2