Prakhar_Garhwal

A slight issue is that the Maesters give up their family names, so it will just be Maester Hoster, if you want to keep the Bracken lineage, you can add that he's known to be from the Brackens

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She was going to die, before this. So, from certain death in a few years and unleashing a zombie apocalypse to being a high value target which has to be retrieved alive for there to be any value, I’d say the second situation is far better.

There's an issue here. There should be a limit to how many logs and sticks of wood are going towards a certain point before they start hitting each other. A better way to do it would have been to do the 1000 stick version blindfolded. That would improve his senses

Current Mood now :- Waiting for new chapter Is there a discord for this story?? I would like to know what the update speed is and when the next update is coming???? As for the chapter, I love the perspectives of the other characters, as it keeps the world moving. Also, with the King of Killers and the 3 Supreme Warrior clans, the worth of Wharton as Nina's husband has just overtaken the other competitors. And that's before Linley's accomplishments as a Saint rank Magus and Warrior are revealed.

Getting some big Ara Ara vibes here.

If violence doesn't solve the problem, you're not using enough of it

I feel that he is advancing too quickly. He's already a Spirit Elder, which is too strong. If anybody tries to read his spirit power, they'll know that he has some insane fortune, or cheat, and will be paying a lot more attention. Seeing the number of chapters in the fic, I'm hoping that there would be some changes later on, otherwise, there isn't really much tension in the fic right now, and doesn't make me feel that the MC is in any danger

Interesting enough start, but there are only 2 chapters, so we'll have to see how it goes. Only problem is Stability of Updates, since it's been 4 months, and there seems to be some weird Word Count chapter filled with junk, which can be skipped. Not sure why it's there. In terms of writing quality, the prose flows well, and the characters feel different and fit in the world. Although, I'm waiting to see what the changes from the MC having a different spirit would lead to, both in the future and in the past as well. Story development seems good, as the MC wishes to work to better himself because of his pride, and he's soon to be having an ideal encounter with the Tang Sect and with Brother Skydream, though that encounter should be going differently. Character design is great, although only 2 chapters in, we haven't really seen much of it. So is World Background, some of MC's past life background is shown, which is a good point.