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Veer_Singh_6983

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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69837mth
    Replied to King_Shivansh

    Shock horror, politicians corrupted something?The only constant in the world is that politicians regardless of race, religion or time are corrupt and there are enough stupid ppl to believe current democracies works!!

    Shudra - The class exclusive to the common or peasant children.
    Rebirth of the Ruined Noble
    Fantasy · Emberlight
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69837mth
    Replied to WriterTheos

    If you need to write a disclaimer about nonsense you put in your own book, it means you didn't realise the issue until it was pointed out. Otherwise you would have either not included it or put the disclaimer at the beginning if the chapter so ppl reading it would already be aware.

    "Kaaameee…"
    Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith
    Fantasy · WriterTheos
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69837mth
    Posted

    Has to be one of the trashiest book I have read for a while. I'm guessing the authors age is about 13. The beginning had good trauma it was a novel setting but quickly fell into clichés. The MC personality is not constant with those who have suffered trauma and been significantly betrayed. I mean do some basic reading on trauma before building it into a story. My god just Google it if you are really lazy.No consistency in world building at all. One moment he is craving for magic spell but takes him a whole year to use it and figure out it doesn't permanent deplete his MP. Then suddenly picks up the ability to use fire? The first antagonist is an uncle who has immense political power but gets bullied by the MC to make a bet? The sheer ridiculous and plots holes are beyond my willing to describe.I hope this review will save some ppl from wasting their precious time. Spend you time on something better.

    Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith
    Fantasy · WriterTheos
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69837mth
    Commented

    given his desire to learn magic its a bit of a plot whole he didn't learn about this sooner. this paragraph implies he only started using the enhance spell a year after getting it.

    Curious to confirm this, he conducted a few experiments using the Enhance spell he learned from the ancient scroll. Each time he tapped into his mana, the stat went down temporarily, only to bounce back to its previous state.
    Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith
    Fantasy · WriterTheos
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69837mth
    Commented

    DBZ didn't exist in America in the 1930s. Dude have some consistency, do you even read what you drafted earlier?

    "Kaaameee…"
    Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith
    Fantasy · WriterTheos
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69837mth
    Commented

    so he maxed his stats as a child but is only average height? Makes no sense.

    Cultivating and training away, a year passed. Lyrian was now 9 years old and was an average height for his age.
    Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith
    Fantasy · WriterTheos
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69837mth
    Commented

    so what happened to the crocodiles? Or did his thic neck muscles scare the off?

    He also swam in the nearby river, battling against the current to improve his stamina and strength.
    Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith
    Fantasy · WriterTheos
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69837mth
    Commented

    wasn't this a forest?

    But why Lyrian still decided to do it because of the sheer number of animals he had seen in the jungle.
    Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith
    Fantasy · WriterTheos
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69837mth
    Commented

    Earlier he described himself as 190cm so this is wrong.

    It could be likened to his height, which had already gone beyond 160cm when he was just ten years old. That made everyone believe he'd become a tall and well-built man. To their surprise, however, his body stopped growing at that age. Simply put, he wasn't gifted. He just developed prematurely.
    The Villain Wants to Live [Ch 362 Full]
    Fantasy · typicalanimewatchr
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69831yr
    Replied to MiuNovels

    The annoying wimpy MC came came back after chpt 100. your lying to us author. I've lost money because of it.

    My Evil System
    Games · MiuNovels
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69831yr
    Replied to Copperhawk

    Thank you for taking the time to write this review. I dislike this type of MC, it has no depth. I like anti-hero as there are normally moral limits, i.e. innocents aren't targeted. Your review had saved me wasting my time reading this novel.

    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69831yr
    Commented

    It's weird how a name change can change your perception so significantly. I can't get back into the book with the name Shang, it's just too weird and keeps pulling me out of the story. It was a good book while it lasted.

    Ch 52 Chapter 52 – Ice Wood Origin
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69831yr
    Commented
    <If Host has questions. Ask me~>
    My Evil System
    Games · MiuNovels
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69831yr
    Commented
    Evil Apprentice? What's that?
    My Evil System
    Games · MiuNovels
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69831yr
    Commented
    What's that?
    My Evil System
    Games · MiuNovels
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69831yr
    Commented
    Class: Evil Apprentice
    My Evil System
    Games · MiuNovels
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69831yr
    Posted

    The translation is pretty bad. It's not to bad for the earlier chapters but gets alot worse. By chapters 70 plus it's just confusing. The grading of troops is all wrong and confusing as are the abilities. Save yourself the time and don't bother, it's just a poor reads.

    Lord Of The World: I Become The Lord Of The Desert From The Start
    Sci-fi · Carp Blowing Bubbles
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69831yr
    Commented

    So after the author spent a few paragraphs highlighting thdure situation of the MC. We now read he is on a boat drinking tea, slight loss of impact.

    After taking a small sip of tea, he looked at the fishing rod in his hand with a frown.
    After Fishing For 10 Years, I Became A Saint Without Knowing How To Raise Beasts
    Eastern · Great River Flows To The Sky
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69831yr
    Commented

    get one of these

    "I'm stuck in a terrifying world where everyone uses familiars to fight, with no way of taming soul beasts, and I have many enemies?!"
    After Fishing For 10 Years, I Became A Saint Without Knowing How To Raise Beasts
    Eastern · Great River Flows To The Sky
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  • Veer_Singh_6983
    Veer_Singh_69831yr
    Replied to The_Void_Monarch

    There are many levels too vanity and laziness, a certain level can bring depth and charm to a character. However, for me personally the level reached nauseating with the MC.

    Taking out gold coins, he spoke, "Brother Kong, I have been wearing these outer sect robes. I do not have anything nice to wear in the tournament. I like White and black colors if I could trouble brother to get me some good white and black colored robes and shoes. I will be very thankful."
    Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System
    Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick
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