The story came rough at first, the MC was in the way of self destruction as there's this bu***hit element called crush and teen angst in Severus' life when he took over, and you know what always happens at puberty, shit happens in that part of life for its 80%, and while it seems off putting and cringe, the monologues where it describes his descent to madness because of Lily, it add a natural and exquisite uniqueness in the story telling WHEN the chat group was introduced in the story, it's where he started the elevation of his character development. The gradual rise of the characters mentality from garbled mess to slightly okay but still mess mentality were done perfectly in my opinion, it might sound as an awful thing but you can't quickly go to 100% normal and truly happy guy if you're stuck from being depressed by 16 years, that's the reason why the MC was still yet effected by Severus' emotions and is not a complete 'fake it till you make it' MC, those kinds of MC's makes me cringe. If anything were to be said, it should be 'good job' and not 'this sucks' to this story.

Welp, I just want to say that I love the story (especially the Furina x MC route? not completely sure if the author would go there or the poor Hydro Archon would get friendzoned ;) haha) for all the things and mishaps it had experienced in publishing (which is understandable), and I'm going to support the book even if it goes into hiatus or something bad happen(who knows?). Anyways, keep up, have fun, and may the Archons grace you with their helping hand.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!dafuq was with the title??? (flabbergasted and choking to death because it is too funny)

perhaps, I'm just starting to come back after my supposed "sleep", I got writer's block in my head so many times that I started to not think of this at all. If I DID add the anime of Kaguya in the plot, I'll mention you since you asked this to me, which is a great help actually.

Thanks for the advice, I'll try to improve myself from now on

😂😂😂 yep, that's a trap I've got 😂😂😂

But I don't have money... and I think I'll just rewrite the chapters after some time...

Hello, fellow author to Oshi no Ko fanfics! I'm very happy that there's someone that finally noticed the animé and it's greatness! Well I have nothing to offer but you can check my profile to see my work(s)! please keep updating this work and show them all the power of our Oshi!

agreed brother

Sadly, my account doesn't allow it to be, I'm trying to put it on the Fanfiction tab but either I'm missing something or the app just didn't let me do my work on fanfic section

Aqua = Blonde Ruby = Blonde Sapphire = Purplish-Red (Kind of same as Ai's right now but when developed he'll have a hair more darker than Ai's

yep, very close to what I'm thinking Sapphire would look like

yahahaha, that's why it's basically a turf war on those two, MC didn't care, and Ruby is too much of an "idol-momcon".

Rest assured~ he will die

in the nutshell, that's how it'll be

she'll be out of the picture in quite a long time, think of it as a quest for Sapphire to being her back

This mudarfakar... your work is so great! fawk! I didn't know there's already an existing fanfic about my favourite novel! fawk! I'm speechless! fawk! I... I can't say any kind of sheet in here because I don't even noticed anything that is bad on your work, I can only curse because I have seen this beautiful fanfic, that I've read the og novel about, that masterpiece has a fanfic that is also a masterpiece! fawk! FAWK!

The story is nice mah dude/gal/lassey whatevs. I followed this book since your release of chapter 63, and though I'm not happy with the progress of chapters(I'm not complaining... sorry if it sounds like I'm complaining). I could say that this book is the literal diamond in the roughs (I honestly don't like most FGO fanfics, especially with "HAREM" tag, god knows how I am disgusted at reading Shirou x Saber x Many fanfics, and with Self insert dudes except on Grand Foreigner, the shit was real, even if it's actually Momonga and not some unknown dude.) so mr/mrs/ms author, what ever you are, keep it going! Thumbs Up and Kudos to you!

I agree too, damn those unrealistic motherfuckers that only think with their dicks instead of head, coward even if they get to know that the woman is pregnant, perhaps they have delusions of the world revolving around them as they are the protagonist, but that is bullshit

Tobirama Is Gay......... Hahahahahahahahhahaha