I’m kinda imagining something like The Siberian from Worm Parahuman with Rath claws and massively long black hair, I imagine his height had increased substantially too

Love it!, want more It’s genuinely a good plot idea and the Ōtsutsuki Mc seems interesting, I’m actually interested in his backstory Well done can’t wait for more

It’s descent, complete wish fulfillment, not something I’d fully read through the Mc doesn’t really struggle or put much effort into his power, he’s handed his abilities, he basically starts Out twice as strong as the absolute peak Itachi, strong enough to overcome an admiral there’s little to no character development, it’s very much an “my character can stomp your character” type of fic meaning the Mc is pretty much unbeatable... It be a much more interesting fic if the Mc started out with weaker abilities, like he can only access a few percentage of Itachi’s powers and has to complete certain missions or quests to unlock more all the while he’s trying to unlock Haki or any of the other unique abilities One piece has but no... instead this fic gives the Mc all the power at the beginning and kills all tension for future chapters In stories where the Mc is monstrously strong and no one can really beat him, it’s the reaction and the shock of the other characters that make the story fun to read But I don’t even care about the reactions cause the characters are so flat and life less, there’s no description of what’s going on to give the characters more life, the Mc is as bland as they come and it just sucks the fun away Is it an interesting idea? Yes Was it written well? No Would I recommend? No, if you can get past the bad writing, bad Mc, bad power scaling, bad story development and Bad world development then yes give it a go I got to chapter 47 Hoping it got better before I gave up on it

Good story, I like the boys and Superman, it’s a story I’ve wanted to see done and this fulfills my want somewhat, it’s not perfect but it’s a lot better than the ratings say My main gripe with this story is the pacing, I feel like it could have done with a few extra chapters focusing on side characters, like Batman saving some people or Atlantis becoming more known in the world, reaction stuff like the average person reacting to what superman did and so on This type of side stuff could be added at a later date so if the author really wanted to he could do that. I like the design choices, the writing quality is good, stability’s decent, the story development is interesting and it’s just the world background where this story falls short

Good story The Mc is realistic and acts like an actual person The gimmick power is interesting and op but doesn’t take over the entire story, like in some stories The other abilities he gains are interesting and the way he gets them is actually very accurate to how a real person would accumulate power The story itself is written really well, the author balanced the characters personality well, I now how easily it is to make the Mc a murder hobo and just be done with it and while the Mc dose dip into that murder hobo psych he quickly pulls himself out It’s good, well written and fun My only real complaint is the items he has and uses, I fell he’s not take full advantage of them, some stuff like his costume can be excused as he’s not really needed a proper costume yet but, and SPOILER ahead, if you haven’t seen chapter 1 don’t read He gets Ultimate Thor’s power Suit and doesn't really use it?, it’s mentioned but rarely used the suit itself has a lot of powers and abilities, from Flight, Super-Strength, limited Invulnerability. Weather manipulation and teleportation Sure vs the real Thor it be crap but added with some other stuff it can easily allow the Mc to match the upper mid tier of marvel, the suit itself comes in like 3 pieces but it only mentions 1 piece in the actual story, so I’m thinking it’s not the complete suit but it’s never stated it’s not The complete suit is like a harness, a belt and a hammer that powers it all Just a thing I noticed while reading doesn't ruin the fic but I’m just wondering why add it if your not going to use it, especially as it’s not some weak or cursed item that’s unnecessary, it’s a suit that grants flight, Invulnerability and super strength

It’s a good story, some people complain about the Mc not being overpowered or the triple life or the harem thing but I don’t think that’s much of a problem If the Mc started off with the power to destroy a solar system it would get boring pretty fast, the MCs strong but he’s not able to one shot Superman and that’s a good thing because if the Mc was that powerful from the get go it would suck all the creativity away, the Mc would never grow as an actual character The triple life is less of a problem then most are making out, the author appears to be skilled enough to handle it and as long as it’s taken seriously it shouldn’t ruin the story The Harem in this story is actually pretty well thought out, in some fics and even actual anime the Mc just has several girls fall into his lap with little to no introduction or chance for him to know them so it feel really shallow but in this story the Author is taking his time, so far he only has one girlfriend but the Mc dose have a strong connection with two other females who he interacts with. Girls aren’t jumping him at every turn, sure you’ll see a few sentences about a female enjoying looking at The Mc but that’s fine, realistic even as the Mc is a saiyan a jacked super being Altogether this story is good, not perfect but no story is, I feel the mcs name and appearance could have had a bit more imagination put into it but that’s my only solid complaint Like I said it’s a good story, would recommend

It’s good, the Mc is learning from his mistakes instead of relying on his Kryptonian powers or Op power-ups, it’s organic in its grow of the characters and the author has done a good job at making the Mc appear more Human or mortal, he makes mistakes, he over plans but he learns from them, something a lot of other mcs in novels don’t do, so that’s good I’d recommend this over a lot of other fics out there

Decent start, some slight problems but a it’s a lot better than a good 60% of the fics on this site, it really just needs more detail and I’d suggest slowing it down a little bit, it dose feel like in chapter 2 your moving at a break neck pace to get to some action, personally I’d have kept his powers secret for a few chapters as he try’s to start up his hero work before he meats Cecile //slight spoilers if you care// -Writing quality, good but I think you need to slow read through your own work once you’ve made a chapter, I noticed on some lines you missed a speech mark or were hit with an auto-correct that wasn’t right. Altogether it’s a good start -Stability of updates, well when writing this you haven’t updated in 2 months so not to good but at least yo have some chapters out -Story development is pretty good, I can kinda see we’re you might be going with it and I think I and quite a few people will enjoy it, my only gripe if the Cecile bit, personally I wouldn’t have reveled knowing so much so openly, id have the Mc state his power and hinted at not trusting Cecile but being willing to work with him, I’d have complete avoided mentioning Omni-man here and mentioned him later once the Mc was set up as a true Hero and someone who can match Omni-man -Character designs, I rated this so low because I have no idea what Tristan looks like you haven’t described him well enough for me to build a mental image, it’s the same with his mother and Cecile, I know who Cecile is but someone who hasn’t read the comics or watched the Show might not or they might have forgotten so it’s best to at least mention the basic things like age, hight, hair, eye and skin color but no you’ve completely skipped out On that and I have no idea what the Mc looks like -world background, The story is only at 2 actually chapters so I won’t go bellow 3 star here, could have used some stuff like dates or a Bit of timeline monologue to catch everyone up to when he is but other than that it’s stuff that can be add in later chapters -Conclusion! It’s a good but patchy start, add some more detail take your time and this could become an amazing read!