M_Loe

Ai sucks and it cannot write

oml this is so shitty, it completely ruined the story 😭 Now watch as he supposedly rewinds universe time, and he gets Charlie back and few years later he has a harem of women. God the power scaling went to shit, I feel like the author got bored and decided it make this story shitter.

Is this ending soon, hopefully. I hope Charlie stays dead, she was lowkey annoying.

No company delays their second season by 5 years or anything that sort that’s just illogical, it’s actually the opposite they rush out the second season of the anime to capitalize on the hype. this fanfic thinks ur stupid, if you start thinking about the world building and the plot everything starts to fail apart. Not to mention the characters, they are so so uninteresting and unimportant, I only recommend you to read this when ur brain is completely shut off like an idiot.

it’s okay, we know ur special, ur ability to shut ur brain off is very overpowered. sadly these fellow reviewers don’t have ur special abilities.

tbh this chapter so ass felt like it was so forced

The writing is consistent decent at most, but the biggest complaint is It’s utterly boring as hell, 99% percent of fanfic is him working a normal shitty job that no one is interested in. And the 1% percent is hero x his other identity. It got repetitive at chapter 1-17 but it’s still going on strong at 80+ chapters and more. It’s just watching someone work for about 99% percent of the time and the character development is zero He’s a robot ironic since it’s ai who wrote him, absolutely emotionless and he only has emotions when the author forces him to. The author has zero idea how to actually make an engaging story, most of the time that I was reading it is with absolutely boredom, having some hope it gets better with more chapters.

Quite boring same thing ever day bro

Nezu would definitely question why he knew about all might timer but he didn’t.

omg femboy hurizan I gotta draw it my hands I can’t stop from thinking about it