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SkullCrusherAsh5mthCommenteddude write the draft save it then go to chat gpt and paste it then ask it to correct all this. it will definitely be much better.
I continued my observation but then an intense pain I took over my head, out of nowhere and memories began to appear in my head.- SkullCrusherAsh5mthCommented
dude u a fan fiction writer or Shakespeare
Her dark, flowing hair framed a face that held both wisdom and an air of regal authority. Her striking blue eyes sparkled with glory, and her sculpted features exuded confidence. - SkullCrusherAsh5mthCommented
why does he feel like the extra in his own story?
Dio exclaimed joyfully. - SkullCrusherAsh5mthCommented
stop being a beta. like be something show some balls. you are the ghost rider right
Jon felt a surge of gratitude towards Chris. He was right. It was time for him to take control of his life, to carve out his own path. And with that thought, the idea of the repair shop didn't seem so daunting anymore. It felt like a new beginning, a chance to start afresh. - SkullCrusherAsh6mthCommented
cringe
"Good recognized good, Dr. Erskine. Sounds like a plan." Clark replied. - SkullCrusherAsh6mthCommented
cuddled and talked with a prostitute.????
Afterward, we cuddled and talked. We went for multiple rounds until the early morning hours. When we finally stopped, Tnu said I was the best she'd ever had. - SkullCrusherAsh7mthCommented
An absolute 300 IQ monster right there folks. what you are witnessing is unprecedented. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Beta police 👮 on high 🚨alert at the station.[img=faceslap]
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why do i smell a 98 IQ beta here.....???!!!
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don't interact with the audience it's pulls you out of the story. not in a good way. say this as authors note at the end.
Travis strutted to the dining room and sat there waiting for the food. He turned to the audience' Yeah I know big flex, I get to have The legendary Tatsumaki to cook for me. Well you too can achieve such greatness by Donating to...' - SkullCrusherAsh7mthCommented
if you always use his full name it's a bit weird.
It was Drav Itsuki, who just escaped just now. As his body falls to the ground, the impact of the fall jolted him awake in pain. - SkullCrusherAsh8mthCommented
why are you describing so gay
The boy turned around and the personage of a legendary hero or great king was now replaced by the image of a caring and kind handsome boy, with a hint of mischief and fun. His eyes, a deep purple one could fall into and be lost in with a bit of red gradient revealing the makings of a beast. - SkullCrusherAsh8mthCommented
such a beta like everywhere.
"Alright Alright, I'm just joking. Tell me about the template I will get." - SkullCrusherAsh8mthCommented
beta fuocker
"...I'm truly sorry. I shouldn't have said that." Sam apologized with his head down. - SkullCrusherAsh9mthCommented
'never fails to amuse me' can only be used when two people meet after a long time. it can't be used the first time.
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this is not how he talks
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this is not Hermoines bossy attitude
I stopped my reading and looked up raising an eyebrow. Her eyes immediately widened as she realized and apologized:"I am s-sorry. No interruptions. Got it. " - SkullCrusherAsh10mthCommented
hagrid is dumb you idiot
Hagrid placed his hand on my shoulder. He looked at me sternly and said :"Harry... talk to me. " - SkullCrusherAsh10mthCommented
i don't feel ready . what kind of a purssy beta are you man. are you even a man
"There's not a day that goes by that I don't miss my family. It's just...well I don't ever feel like I have the time to mourn over my mother's passing and I can't face my siblings for abandoning them. Even as a child I knew there was many many things I have to do and accomplish in this world within a few years. And every year a new thing is added on to my list with my deadline coming closer and closer" Wanda lets go of my arm to reach up and touch my face with both of her hands. She backs away from my neck and plant a kiss on my lips. I lift her up as I make her sit on top of my lap with one hand wrapped around her waist while the other hand begins to slowly rub her back. I don't know what is happening around us or the world but I do know that we're both locked in the sensation of each other as our lips touch and taste one another. The room begins to steam up as our bodies become hotter and hotter. I want to stop this because I don't feel ready but I don't want to stop myself either. Wanda begins to rock her hips on my lap as lil Ned starts to stand up like a gentleman. It has been over a lifetime since I've last done anything like this. Hell I haven't even gotten the chance to beat myself since I've been too busy trying to gain powers in this playthrough. - SkullCrusherAsh10mthCommented
what kind of hardships did you go through .mf let his mother die . why are you even alive . you should commit suicide
No. I can not accept that. I did not go through all of these hardships just to be a microbe within this game of chess. I did not killed my mother just to live without any free will. All the sacrifices and pain I went through will not be in vain. FUCK THAT! If I am an anomaly in this storyline. A glitch in this matrix. Then that means I have free will. The choices and decisions that everyone makes in this lifetime are predestined and locked into place. Everyone except me. I finally have the powers I had dreamt of ever since my discovery of the true nature of this world. This-this lost of Pietro is just another obstacle. Another bump to deterred and errode my heart and will to make me fall in line. I will not let it pull me down into the ground. This just means I still have more room to grow. I thought gaining mastery over the mystic arts and spider powers would be enough for me to survive but it's obvious I was wrong.