I am extremely confused at times, and the pov jumping is kinda goofy. The writing quality is good. World building is great, a lot of different types of magic smooshed together in 1 story. I want to see how you deal with it. Dragons are also cool. The story has potential and so far is good.

Let's be honest. the first chaps are rough... But I am proud of my latest 5-6 chaps and will continue to put out work even better than it. I would be glad if you could stay until chap 17 to decide if this fanfic is worth your time, which I think it is.

How can one be so incorrect as you

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