honestly had quite a promising start but i’d say the drop off in quality is quite substantial. i’ve read the authors other works and they seem to all share the same problem of pacing, power scaling and character development. With my main gripe being the last point, too many times has Leonel reflected onto his past actions and makes a whole spiel about changing but never does and then he just keeps saying “he’s just a kid” as an excuse every single time. The romance itself is an issue, and this comes from a person who loves the genre but the interactions between leonel and fmc are not very interesting with pretty much zero chemistry between them.

the first few chaps have just been in your face info dumps pretty much

cheap

up to chap 815: my guy seriously knows how to waffle, he explains ideas and new plot points a bit overdrawn but relatively well, but the issue is that it is then further explained again in the same overdrawn manner with only occasionally new information strewn in. There are some chapters and paragraphs that are just exposition to some beningn and minor matter that the author either forgets or only brings up in one small sentence in the future. I find myself unengaged and skipping large portions of what can only be described as drivel. Other than that it’s good.

archers always be the side characters, nice seeing them as the mc

second phase

:(

them fighting words

more then decent bruh, she couldn’t even determine it

he must’ve gotten heaps of soul points

maybe bcs u have like 800,000,000,000 merits point m with literally the same stays as him

and litetally have the same status as him

madam su, bout to kick herself after finding this shi out

she fr hating on the best son in law in the verse rn

so he made the right decision at least in the opinions of the system

what was homie doing in his past life

real

the mistress better not be his mum or summin

isn’t the lady that gave him the system a demon and part of them or diff organisation

free my guy