Nacht_Imp

Too gay for me. Bro's being bros.

I won't lie. This is the most boring cyberpunk fic I have come across. Goodluck on your future translations. Hopefully you pick a better fic next time.

Word salad. Gibberish.

Then why pretend to be him. He at least knew his new name. So you're just plain wrong.

Copy pasted stat screens does not make a story. Plus I did say the story part was good. You don't agree?

The story is good so far. But the resistance list doesn't mean anything to us readers. Do you think we are gonna check 40+ entries every chapter? No off course not. You could have just given him a single buff and left it at that with some normal training. So it would save you a lot off time to edit that out now in the early stage. System fics are flawed in general. It is bad story telling no matter how popular they seem.

I haven't noticed any improvement on the bad prose and spelling. Is this a machine generated bad translation? Is this story even yours? Sadly most patreon warriors nowadays don't even bother writing their own stuff. Easier to steal something and scam some quick money out of it.

A solo Merc(enary) works alone. David has a team so he isn't a Solo. And you spell Netrunner constantly wrong also. It is time you fix these basic mistakes if you are serious about this fic.

Did you know that rabbits have no nutritious value? It costs more calories to process then it contains. You can literally stave yourself by eating only rabbits. Just a fun fact.

The story is ok, The grammar is not. They are in Night City. He is a Merc. Viktor is a Ripper. So many words are used wrong....