Namikaze4aditya

THE DEVELOPMENT ARC IS FINALLY OVER THE LONGEST IN HISTORY BUT WE SURVIVED LETS GOO🗣️

bro's defination of lock in matches with vain icl

waiting for it to be a hot girl 🌚

well that went out of hand fast 💀

this line gives insane deja vu

This novel is a decent read with some cool battles and an interesting world. The story has its moments, though it can feel too fast at times, and a few characters could use more detail. Still, it’s enjoyable enough if you’re into this kind of genre.

Shameless beta reader here so obviously it will be a 5 star, but I will try to give the review with not complete bias ofc so this is my experience so far: Pros: 1. A modern fantasy setting which is seen much less these days. It's really refreshing compared to reading the same medieval era stuff. 2. It goes deep inside the now popular "reincarnated as an extra" genre and doesn't hesitate to behave as one. The author doesn't try to forcefully differentiate it from the rest, which might seem like a con at first but is a pro imo since a lot of authors try to eat up more than they can handle and get indigestion instead. 3. The author tries his best to make sure his writing style flows properly and doesn't repeat words too much, which makes reading more comfortable. 4. He is up for any feedback and will listen to what his readers want. 5. His beta reader is goated ofc. Cons: 1. It's his first novel so obviously it might seem a bit lacking compared to experienced authors, but from what I have noticed he is improving at a good pace. 2. It might come off as a bit cliché to some, but that's the purpose; it's supposed to satisfy that rom com hunger. 3. His naming sense... please don't even get me started about it... The eldritch horrors he unleashed on me. 4. There might be a bit of pacing issue since he is still learning, but he is trying his best and will improve further after gaining the feedback of you all readers. 5. He only has 1 beta reader rn that is me, so it's possible that we might miss some errors, so I apologise in advance and I hope you all can either mention them in the comments or discord server of the novel. I hope you all can give it a try and enjoy your experience if you find it lacking please feel free to offer constructive critisism.

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