This was great. When i get off this semester, ill come through for an edit.

Well.. 9k views.. 9k words.. write more homie. Ill edit .. maybe. Lol. Keep going.

I just got to read the first 40 pages. Its going to be great. I cant continue to edit until after this next semester but i hope everyone likes 🤯😵🤯👤👥👉👈🤳👋👋🙏👂🧠💢💥💨💬💬🗨💭🤩🤩

If i edit this, you gonna give me credit again?

Okay. This meme.. lol

Editing is hard. At least book 1 is nearly there. 13? To go..

Much better. Ill email you each chapter as i go. This is not easy but great. I do have lots of free time but sitting for so long is actually painful for me. Like I said, polish it a bit, go through all the chapters..then print this. I want a copy. 😎 Keep writing.

Sounds like work. Just keep polishing, i think it was great. A clean editing and this book could be printed.

Not a bad transition. I like the changes

Needs some editing here.

Dude

One of my favs. Hands down one on the best ive read about transitionals between a modern world and another place. Ive read a butt ton of isekai and this really is one of the best. If you didnt read it.. give it some love

It was a lot of reading. Im happy with the time i spent. Some parts of it are a bit extreme but i think it helps bring out whats not said. I might even read it again now that its completed. The author wrote this daily so its bound to have its ups and downs. I thought about giving it a 4.8 but it gets a 5 because i liked it. The main character is so impulsive.