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Raj_Agarwal854

Raj_Agarwal854

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  • Raj_Agarwal854
    Raj_Agarwal8542yr
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    waiting for next chapter.

    Ch 6 The next day part-2
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  • Raj_Agarwal854
    Raj_Agarwal8542yr
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    The beginning of the story is amazing. Perfect introduction of the characters. Also your language is really nice, simple and elegant. This is going to be a great story. But who is the narrator is it you or is it virika. because sometimes you have written from you perspective, you being the third person narrating the story about 2 people. And sometime you have written '"I ............ " So is it from your perspective or virika's perspective. Anyways, I really liked the story. Just CANT wait for the next chapter

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