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Dian_Rubianty2yrPostedLove it! The main idea of this story is not something totally new. But the way the author describe it make it different and special. I love the way the story is started.BOOM! it creates curiosity and you can stop reading it after that. the plot of this story is nice. there is a flash back that explain things.
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At the beginning, the typos and grammatical errors reduce the joy of my reading a bit. But then, I choose to just let it be? Lucky us, we still can figure out the flow without any difficulties? for some, these kind of things would make them confusešš»
Raising both his hands up, Yang Yutang said," Okay Okay. I won't. Now Mr Jealous Li can me talk business." - Dian_Rubianty2yrReplied to Atakushi
It would be cool if the author can fix these kind of typos? As typos and grammatical errors would reduce the joy of reading this interesting story. Well, only a bit tough
Li Singtan patted his friends shoulder and said," I'll take care of everything don't worry. You just prepare the team. I have a feeling that we will need them soon. I am shifting to the Li ancestral mansion this weekend with Ming. It's safe their." - Dian_Rubianty2yrCommented
I love the last line. Way to go Mother Lišššā¤ļø
Mother Li smiled at her daughter and said," You should also reflect on giving me grandchild." - Dian_Rubianty2yrCommented
"I hope you know what you have to do..." The author missed the "TO". This story has a cool flow, plots and the way the author describe the main character really makes my imagination grows... this is a modern yet classy romance. But small grammatical errors such as typo and missing words... sometimes would interrupt the joy of reading.
Mother Li narrowed her eyes and said," I hope you know what you have do. If not let me know I will do it for you Instead."