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Love2laugh29322mthCommentedWeāre just repeating ourselves at this point. This book is written very noticeably by an amateur. Forgets important details. Repeats gossips and puts it as if itās new newsā¦ just goes in circles. Done reading this book. Could be really good, author just need to refine their skills. Get the storyline focused and not forget what theyāve already written.
"There were always many men that were interested in Sister Daphne," Drusilla revealed.- Love2laugh29322mthCommented
Her sister would
Daphne's mouth fell open in surprise and she hurriedly did as Atticus asked, stuffing the pouch inside her tunic. With the corset covering her chest, people wouldn't notice the extra fabric. What's more, no one would dare to search such an intimate part of her body, to begin with. She could think of no safer place.Ā - Love2laugh29322mthReplied to Love2laugh2932
I think the author forgot what she previously wrote when she put this.
It seemed to be a polite statement of greeting, but everyone present knew the underlying meaning of his words. He had called Daphne a princess, which was her original title, instead of addressing her as Vramid's queen. - Love2laugh29322mthCommented
What is he supposed to say when Atticus introduced her as suchā¦
It seemed to be a polite statement of greeting, but everyone present knew the underlying meaning of his words. He had called Daphne a princess, which was her original title, instead of addressing her as Vramid's queen. - Love2laugh29322mthCommented
The back and forth is at this point just annoying. Itās too many times. Got then coldā¦ this book is giving me whiplash, Iām losing interest.
She really was a burden to Atticus. If she didn't perform well as a queen, Atticus might simply decide to leave her behind after the hunt. That thought was painful.Ā - Love2laugh29322mthCommented
With the ālikesā of you*
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I thought she was at the first gathering with Julius
Julius's mother couldn't believe that Emily, a real princess, was in their home displaying such humility. Esme expressed, "I have been eager to meet and speak with you, Princess. You are truly beautiful! I don't think I have ever seen a woman as pretty as you." - Love2laugh29324mthCommented
How about that gold coin you liar
"Please, Anna! I don't ask much! I brought you coal and fresh parchments. Only one sketch of Lady Sophia, and I won't ask anything more from you. I will do anything you ask me to." - Love2laugh29321yrCommented
But itās morning?
It was only when the clock struck twelve last night did Mr. Humphrey came to find that Eve had already left the Moriarty mansion long ago. Right now, he held flowers in his hand, ready to propose to the woman he believed to be his future wife before any other suitor would come to her door.Ā - Love2laugh29321yrCommented
Lol Vincent you bad boy youāre the one that killed the cows š š
"Word has it that there is a siren living amongst the innocent and kind people of Meadow," said Vincent, looking to the side where the fireplace burned logs of wood. "It seems like someone fell under the charms of the creature, which is why there was a recent death of the cattle in your town." - Love2laugh29321yrCommented
I love it and was hoping you would bring them back ā„ļø
"You are the strength I draw from, Rome," Julie leaned in to Roman for support and she said, "Everything is finally how it was supposed to be."Ā - Love2laugh29321yrCommentedCh 310 Turning on the lights
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Betrayed š¤£
Tom stood up, and Lucy turned to Sonia for help when she noticed Tom was coming over to where they were seated, but Sonia only winked at her, "Loosen up, Lu. Try to enjoy yourself every time you get the chance. You only live once." - Love2laugh29321yrCommented
Ahhhhhhhh!!!!! ā„ļø yes yes yes!!!!!!!!!
"I guess it was never meant to be the last, Azazel," Lilian replied with a smile. - Love2laugh29321yrCommentedOnce he had slammed the door with his kick, he instantly started kissing back Kizy, his wild aura leashed out.
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I think itās great so far!
I am not that good with intimate scenes so hope you'll not curse me for this one... - Love2laugh29322yrCommentedMrs. Davis fell on her knees, her body changing and weak right now because of her transformation. She couldn't believe that she had turned into a vampire!