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Armored Core? Well, this is better than you taking TSF references from Muv Luv. I hate those things, especially the early ones.
WTF is this?? The beginning of the story is quite promising, the MC's personality is quite normal and maybe acceptable to the general reader. But somehow, since he became "superman", his personality changed to emo, too serious and even cruel. Yes, I know the MC has ptsd after being unable to save a girl who was eaten by an Oni, but this still makes me annoyed with his behavior.
Will Alastor's astartes legion (grey knights) be sent by the Emperor of Mankind to Azeroth as reinforcements? By the way, because of this novel, I was inspired to write a similar novel, where the Second Primarch is sent to Azeroth and establishes a new Imperium far removed from the Warhammer 40K universe.
No update?
Rhaenyra hasn't had children with anyone yet, and her love interest seems to be Baelon. As for Alicent, in this version of the novel, she's a tool for her father like in the series, but Baelon's influence in her life is quite significant (such as considering him a younger brother or even her own son). I say this after reading up to the latest chapter of the novel, not just the first 20 chapters...
I feel weird. MC knows the storyline of Douluo Dalu 1, but he doesn't know that the damn rabbit is Xiao Wu?
It was initially good and promising. However, after more than 200 chapters, the novel has become boring. Especially the original author who always gives Roy unreasonable plot armor, damn, there have been so many incidents but his identity is still not fully revealed? Is the author underestimating the capabilities of the United States government organization? Because, by even the simplest logic, Roy's abilities should have been traceable, whether intentionally or unintentionally.