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allegations....
"I already know your tactics When you swallow you attack with whirlpools that attract prey But I see a disadvantage, 'cause I don't even have to kill you I just have to avoid you See, if you don't spit it out soon, all that water will destroy you Oh, bring it on 'Til you're out of breath, 'til there's nothing left I'm holding on 'Til I'm in the clear, 'til I'm out of here, oh"
self justified righteousness.
"arise"
how does she know ? didn't the cube reverse Time to before neo had the chance to show his strength and just seconds ago she was demanding answers from Athena as to why she teleported them away?
tsun tsun?
great chapter man, story is rough around the edges, but considering you wrote it in like 3 months is insane, great story i really hope ill get to see its end.
is you mc Kim dogega's fragment?
this reminds me of something...i think kojiro sasaki from record of Ragnarok
i agree, seems like a plothole.