Good captivating start for a Novel, characters are well written and the premise of the world is introduced in a very amazing fashion. Writing Quality - Very well written for a novice writer, you can see the improvement in quality as the story progresses. Story Development - Story develops at a decent pace even if it has slowed down slightly. I am writing this at chapter 16 so will see how the content shapes as the story continues. Character Design - Characters are well designed and each has unique personalities. I am currently also not seeing a lot typical tropes you see in most stories which is very nice and fresh to read. World Background - We got a very amazing introduction to the world in the first few chapters. I do however think it would be great to read more about some of the newer areas as the main cast interacts with the world, just a bit more in depth world building would make a big change.