thank yuo for helping with my mistake

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go to everything you have commented on

yes bro

ps this is the other acc

Overpowered in Kuroko no Basket

got you

Have I improved

I like this book so far img(more)img(mimg(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)img(more)ore)

You are a baby billion-dollar bill in the making. THis story guideline is giving what it should give from the prologue to the end of the current last chapter. Stay motivated to do better and continue your hard work.

ok

hi this is the creator on my other account I will make a better version of this very soon

I restarted my whole book thanks though I will try and do better.I like your book though totally better than mine by far

NGL this junk is really one of my favs keep dropping it, bro plz its too lit. Sincerly Mikai you are on of my favorite authors more now nun less

im bout to drop some

I will work on this thanks for the review

so do you like the new chapter want to know your thoughts

You will see the relationship that he builds with someone with the same intentions soon and I got you

I like this story but can you please update more. As the character is strong he isn't simping over females also I like how he is an advocate of gender equality.

Very good and I believe that if I keep working it will be better.If I would have kept going and worked hard it would definitely be better and this is why I believe it would be a 4.6 and this was my first one and it wasn't that bad.