He totally did LOL

couldn't have put it better myself

I'm very glad that's the case. I look forward to your continued support and feedback.

That is an amazing question! It is explained that the quirk has its own consciousness, that runs based on his memories. That does not mean it has his biases. meaning it's its own entity. Now considering that this is a hero society, and they are in I-island, I would say that his moral compass would have a heroic inclination, even if its subconscious. Now in a way, he is restricted by the quirk. if he decides to be a villain out of nowhere, his quirk will not just up and change just to agree with him. he will be judged, and if his reasoning for doing villainous acts is deemed sound enough, then it will allow it. this quirk acts as a guiding hand, leading him to become the best version of himself. That means that if he misuses his powers and kills let's say, a crowd of people for no reason, the quirk will pull him into the court of self and he will be tried for misues of his quirk, and he may lose the ability to use it depending on the sentencing. So I would say, yes and no to him being a slave to it. If he has a solid explanation and wins the trial, he will be capable of doing whatever he wants. if he doesn't win, however, then he will receive a just punishment. does that answer your question? if you have any more, please, feel free to ask, I love conversing on this.

Realmente aprecio la reseña. Estoy buscando que valga la pena leerlo, así que quiero que los personajes se sientan vivos y que sus acciones impacten a quienes los rodean. No es sólo una historia donde todo es estático. Espero leer más de sus pensamientos sobre mi novela, ya que toda crítica constructiva es bienvenida.

Thank you so much, I greatly appreciate the review. I am trying to tone down the similies in my fights, since the prologue had a bit too many, slowing down the pace. Just to clear one thing up, as of the recent couple of chapters, he is on i-island, that's his home.

Didn't even know who she was Lol. But I can see why you would think so, there are some similarities.

Hero. Though there will be some minor elements of the hero Hawks in there. No killing, however.

I'm glad you liked it. I'm aiming to make this story the best MHA story out there. So I look forward to your support!

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the novel so far is good. the beginning can do with some work, but overall, it works out. I'm surprised nobody cared to think about what his wand could signify. nobody? just me then. I like his interactions with Hermione. I can also understand why he doesn't talk to so many people. think about it. a grown-ass man in the body of a kid having to participate in 11-year-old conversations seems tiring and boring as f***. I like how Drak doesn't give him all the answers. he has to work for it himself. it is almost like Drak gives him clues instead. the storyline is a bit flat though I must admit but reading the comments the author has written I suspect that it will be different from the first year at the very least. looking forward to it. the Writing quality is very good, and I can easily gloss over the small grammatical errors. stability of updates is fantastic since he is writing two books at the same time. very hard working. character design-wise, I would prefer if Tom had some issues. I liked the whole dragon characteristics influencing his personality and the occlumency counter was wise. I don't see anything wrong with it and I suspect it was used as a plot device to set up the use of occlumency. smart! I like Hermione's change over the course of the year. Kids are easy to mold at an early age, so her change isn't that unrealistic. I like his later interactions with Seamus and Dean. and the spin on his father. very interested to see more of their interactions. his interactions with Dumbledaddy are great and their little battle of wits is very entertaining to read. Voldemort did seem a bit dumber than usual though. for someone who was known to think 20 moves ahead. he was surprisingly outwitted by an 11-year-old. but again, he was weakened and blinded by the desire to get the stone so it can be overlooked. I feel like Drak needs some character development, but I don't see how the author could make that work. either way that was a side note. World background, there is not much of it. we already have a preconceived idea of the world from J.K Rowling. I do think the author needs to expand on this though. Overall, I think this novel is great. everyone keeps trashing on the beginning and write nonsensical reviews about earlier chapters and making assumptions about things they don’t know. I would 100% recommend this. it is a good read with 2 chapters being released every day. give it a try and bear with the beginning if you don't like it. it gets better. I have very high hopes for this Harry potter fanfic, keep up the good work.