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DaoistvYCbiL

DaoistvYCbiL

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2021-10-20 JoinedGlobal
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL1yr
    Replied to BleakSky

    Only the forest of death has entrance rules per canon. There was no mention of rules for the others, and we have officially seen civilians at least once in the anime at one of the training grounds, the one where Jiraiya teaches Naruto for the first time. He spies on the three civilian young women who are playing inside the shallow waters at the foot of a waterfall.

    'Huh, that name is cool...NO' I pocketed the scroll and walked out of the shop after saying goodbye to Higurashi-san. I walked to a nearby training ground and after traveling through the trees I arrived at a secluded spot by a clearing within the forest of training ground 2.
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    The System: Civilian Shinobi
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL1yr
    Replied to JoSauer

    In case you haven't noticed yet, read my comments.

    Professor Binns looked at me and spoke "Well during older times, grimoires were considered a spellbook collection of all charms and runes that could provide guidance in making magical objects like talismans and amulets, or how to perform magical spells, charms and divination. They were a standard for any wizarding family but after the "witch trials" and "goblin wars" many famous grimoires were lost or burned by muggles.
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    In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom
    Book&Literature · ayrus2011
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL1yr
    Replied to FluffyWolfAdmirer

    So?

    "Yes, it is… but I feel like I obtained a new level of strength without deserving it, my weapon also looks more powerful than the others," Drew said.
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    I Can Make Everything Level UP
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL1yr
    Replied to Layin

    Who said I'm reading? I read, stopped, reviewed, and put it on the shelf, imbecile.

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    I - Danzo
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to JoSauer

    At that time, it wasn't every wizard that could do it. From the 12nd to 16th century this kind of ability was only common among those big old families. The common wizards barely even knew how to use magic and because they used to suppress themselves to avoid trouble, some ended up turning into that black aberration from the new movies.

    Professor Binns looked at me and spoke "Well during older times, grimoires were considered a spellbook collection of all charms and runes that could provide guidance in making magical objects like talismans and amulets, or how to perform magical spells, charms and divination. They were a standard for any wizarding family but after the "witch trials" and "goblin wars" many famous grimoires were lost or burned by muggles.
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    In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom
    Book&Literature · ayrus2011
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Posted

    Above all else, the biggest problem is writing quality. It's definitely among the worse ones in this platform. The author wants to write in English but uses the Brazilian format, this is simply annoying and makes the reading experience go down a notch. Overall, the writing needs to improve ASAP, as it's truly the biggest sin of this fanfic.

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    I - Danzo
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to MrIIIo

    These are the workers of very amateur Brazilian writers. As a Brazilian myself, I too find it very annoying whenever someone writes in English using this format.

    - Danzo, if you don't get up right now, I swear, I'll kill you! - some girl said threateningly.
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    I - Danzo
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Commented

    My first "adult" experience was at eleven years old so...

    When Pansy came close to him, he decided to ignore her and pretended to be asleep. How could he know that little lolita would dive deeper into her feelings and even plant a kiss before leaving? How the hell an 11-year-old girl even knows these things.
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    In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom
    Book&Literature · ayrus2011
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to JoSauer

    Consider that for every wizard, there was like an army of muggles. They had a bunch of weapons, enough gold to siege a city, ammunition enough for a war, and their only goal was to hunt weirdos calling themselves mages. I don't think mages at that time had the ability to resist so many rats biting them.

    Professor Binns looked at me and spoke "Well during older times, grimoires were considered a spellbook collection of all charms and runes that could provide guidance in making magical objects like talismans and amulets, or how to perform magical spells, charms and divination. They were a standard for any wizarding family but after the "witch trials" and "goblin wars" many famous grimoires were lost or burned by muggles.
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    In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom
    Book&Literature · ayrus2011
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to TriNatry

    Lorewise this is just the best result and not a restriction. People can even use their own hair or blood as a core when asking wandmakers to make a wand for them. If you don't remember, they can always pick up any wand on the steet and use it, just take a while to get used to them.

    "Nan, I am not sure which one will be available but I guess my wand should be a combination of cherry wood with any of the core. Dragon heartstring or phoenix feather as the core would be a more powerful combination." I replied with a straight face.
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    In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom
    Book&Literature · ayrus2011
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to kuokyo

    It takes time to develop an ideal British accent worthy of my Yorkshire tea, naturally, no baby would dare to properly speak till they could truly talk the language of the queen.

    "No granny stop them. Bellatrix is coming for them. Stop them granny!" I kept shouting but all that came out of my mouth was "ba ba ya ya ba!"
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    In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom
    Book&Literature · ayrus2011
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to Vastoking

    Rather than not understanding the human mind they are just apathetic losers that believe themselves to be the real life version of Sasuke.

    "No granny stop them. Bellatrix is coming for them. Stop them granny!" I kept shouting but all that came out of my mouth was "ba ba ya ya ba!"
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    In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to Soma_sama

    To be honest, this superman has indeed a level of logic comparable to that of a toddler.

    "That was so cool! No screw that, it was amazing. I was flying, even for a few seconds, it was the really mind blowing amazing!" I started shouting but only the " ba ba ba" sound came from my throat.
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    In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom
    Book&Literature · ayrus2011
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to OfReality

    "It was then that the protagonist realized that a set of very expensive Dungeons & Dragons guidebooks were spread all over a table together with many thumb-sized figures of barbaric orcs, white haired wizards, and smoking hot female dark elves. Even if only from the corner of his eyes, the glimmering and unsettling words at the cover, Neverwinter, made him realize that his mother, was indeed, a tabletop rpg player."

    "How? Was it me? My mother did say I will become a wizard? Am I born in a wizard family? What kind of world is this?" all of sudden, I had a lot of questions for myself.
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    In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom
    Book&Literature · ayrus2011
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to Cultreevation

    That's some Dark Souls logic right there.

    Remembering that experience, I started to cry. I was a grown man in my 30s but nothing prepares for you for dying like that. Nothing.
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    In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom
    Book&Literature · ayrus2011
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to SagaLF11

    his power is 1, while they are at 20, if you see my note on chapter 3 you will understand, but basically, this difference is merely in numbers and doesn't represent real strength at this level. To put it plainly, the actual difference is at most 5 times in terms of lifting strength for example, while in terms of being able to take punches, there's almost no difference. So while Rayne can lift about 10 KG, they can lift about 50, just that this difference doesn't really translate to power. This is also a comedy-like situation though, if it was a one on one battle in even terms, naturally, the mc wouldn't win, but they are afraid of him because of a misunderstanding and think that he's much stronger than them, this makes them way too cautious and hesitant in acting, which allows him to exploit their weakness.

    Ch 2 2: Improving while fighting!
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    Idle System In Dragon Ball: Human Version
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to bluS24

    And he still did it! :)

    Congratulations! You have defeated an opponent with a Battle Power twenty times higher than yours! You've received a special gift and the Idle Assistant Tool's installation is finished sooner and is now ready to use!
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    Idle System In Dragon Ball: Human Version
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to bluS24

    1 because he's four year old

    Congratulations! You have defeated an opponent with a Battle Power twenty times higher than yours! You've received a special gift and the Idle Assistant Tool's installation is finished sooner and is now ready to use!
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    Idle System In Dragon Ball: Human Version
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to DaoistvYCbiL

    But for everyone else who comes here, basically, this is only the difference in BP, and at this low level, it's literally the difference between a normal kid and an adult, although these ones specifically are slightly stronger due to having received some training.

    Congratulations! You have defeated an opponent with a Battle Power twenty times higher than yours! You've received a special gift and the Idle Assistant Tool's installation is finished sooner and is now ready to use!
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    Idle System In Dragon Ball: Human Version
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  • DaoistvYCbiL
    DaoistvYCbiL2yr
    Replied to Vastoking

    Lol, it can be, but... it will take a long, long time to reach that level, and even so, it won't be comparable to the real thing as it also gives a natural instinct towards attacking people too, this one is more of an automated reaction to various situations that are dangerous, similar to spider-sense but weaker as it can't 'predict' the future as the spider-sense does.

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    Idle System In Dragon Ball: Human Version
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