Gospelwriter

I prefer it it gets boring reading like oh another orphan to people who don't even matter nah I like the build up and loss it gives a little risk although he doesn't end up suffering anything else

I suggest revising your previous chapters then...it's either confusing or there are some discrepancies

we all would be Riley if we had those powers and some drugs to let our inner thoughts roam

I know better than that ...crazy strong smart old lady

well I mean double the push-ups isn't double the difficulty so maybe correlated to difficulty

in the show yes comic book no there are certain grades of the drug in the comic one that I saw basically makes a random adult like queen Maeve level of strength

just leaving a average review here i want to see everyone else's thoughts on my humble work so far? I hope to continue with this but also hope I can have audience with me as I improve.