as much as im enjoying the story line the lack of proof reading makes it a bit hard to follow.

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this book is a mess why is the last chapter filled with missing chapters, and 9 and 10 the same thing ugh

This is very hard to follow. I feel like having someone review to edit would be very helpful. it seems like a decent storyline

i really enjoy this book, but am sad its not free

im so lost lol