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I hate to say this but this 20+ chapter flashback is quickly making me lose interest in the story, neither of the main characters can die so none of the minor conflict means anything, we haven't even really gotten to the parts of the conflict that have current day repercussions, and the people we care at all about won't arrive on this world for hundreds of years.
time and distance seem interchangable here, is it "small amounts of land the largest is 3 kilometers" or "only short durations, the longest being 3 years"
Footnote "internal screaming"
we miss ya author, wish we could get an update on what's going on. even we want more communication, everybody is ok with a "hey this month I can't do chapters" but not posting many/any chapters for a month without telling us is upsetting to some
protag=lemon
i thought antihonist was a mistake, but then i realized, anti-ho-nist, the only real enemy for a harem protagonist
While i like nate, this is the same guy who thought that being a vampire is good because he can eat more protein, he is dumb as a sack of bricks and tends to let emotions roll off his back. though he is likable because of how well meaning and loyal he is I do not know how well he actually pairs up with layla who is quite intelligent and hardcore emotional.
wheel of time ended with him wandering off while most people think he is dead yes, but all his girls are still devoted to him and he can pop in for snusnu whenever he wants.
and give her new ones...