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I like the story but tray to make narrative a little faster like don't focus on to much on the current protagonist Rilus , the advantage that you have is that you story is focus on a Dinasty, because from the look , we will be with the young lord for a long time. But is still a Ok chapter 6 out of 10
The story as potential I really like that the story as 2 protagonist with different personality, I puted only 3 star in updating stability because I don't know if the story we will drop or not , I think that this story can be one of the best on the website and hispotential and the lore is 💯 for now hope to read more of it. I have high up . The author is talented and his doing a fantastic job.
I agree is we are waiting 30 + plus chapter fpr Uquiora , how much will he taks for the others, before seing Madara and the others will be in chapter 500+ , is good to not showing them imidietly but at lest you have to sprinkle one of them at lest some time.
The story is great and I like the world bulding and the strategy conquest I have great expectation . For the 140 words yghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh jjhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhh uhhhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjkkjjjjjjkjjj hhhe hehhehe ehwhhwhehwhe uwhwhwhwhwhw whhwhwhwhwhwhw uwuuuwuwuwuujwj whwhjwhwhw wuwjhwh wjwhhhwhw whwhhwbw wjwjjwwjhw hshehwh wuwh u wue uwbw Okv OkOk Ok Okjujhjjj uuujjjjjj uuj uuuh yhhh hhhhhh uhhh uhhh uhh uhhh uhhh uuhh hyyh uuhh uhhhh hhjhh uhhhh hhhh ujhh jjjj uuhhbuhh huhh hhhj uuhjjbb jjj