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badbyotch2yrPostedIt's great! Good update time, story development, character design, world background, all that stuff. However, a problem I feel lies with many popular writers on the platform; the writing level is far lower and less advanced, giving the impression that the work was rushed out. I get it, it's difficult to regard writing quality in a place of high priority when you are focusing on the characters and the time of updates, however, it is something professional writers will notice when they read through pieces like this.
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The first word is the most important! Aaaaand you nailed it. :D
"Fuck!" Deshaun cursed under his breath as he opened the fridge. "Damn, I gotta go to the store," he said as he closed it almost immediately. He was poor and wasn't ashamed to admit it. He had grown since he was younger as most people do. He grew to understand that being poor wasn't something to be ashamed about. He worked his hardest and continued to work his hardest it was just his lot in life. But that was beside the point, now he had to go to the store. He lazily put on some respectable clothes. His mother god rest her soul was adamant that every time he went outside he would wear real clothes. He didn't listen when he was younger but now that she was gone it weighed heavily on him, that he wasn't better to her when she was alive. - badbyotch2yrReplied to Asami_Nakamura
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To all my readers~ Apologies. My schedule is so full at the moment. I cannot release the new chapter today because I have only written about half the 3,000-word count I wanted to put into it. Hopefully, it will be out by tomorrow or at the latest on Thursday/the next 2 days. Thank you for understanding, and thanks to you if you are reading this message in general. Wishing you fair winds.
Ch 8 Within Wisteria Walls - badbyotch2yrReplied to schizocat
yeah somewhat
Okaasan makes the best food. - badbyotch2yrReplied to BreathOfSin
Minka (Japanese: 民家, lit. "house of the people") are vernacular houses constructed in any one of several traditional Japanese building styles. In the context of the four divisions of society, Minka were the dwellings of farmers, artisans, and merchants (i.e., the three non-samurai castes).
We exit the minka and come to a large open platform, with long tables and symbols painted in different colors hanging over each of them on flowing banners. They are laid out with small wooden square dishes of eggs and furikake, and bowls of mixed rice with uni and ikura. - badbyotch2yrReplied to schizocat
Whoa do you have foresight or what :)
Okaasan makes the best food. - badbyotch2yrReplied to
*gasp* how did you know???
Okaasan makes the best food. - badbyotch2yrReplied to schizocatCh 8 Within Wisteria Walls
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