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I need another ch, this just left me wanting to read more

You have a big point there. Utaha is a heroine in every story where she appears, to the point where she's a little annoying, to be honest. Personally, if the author decides not to choose Utaha, I would prefer him to stay with Yui, although I wouldn't mind him staying with Kawasaki.

Honestly, I felt more connected to Utaha than to Kawasaki. At least for my part, it always gave me the illusion that the author focused more on romantic and emotional depth with Utaha

Tftc

Webnovel is in such a brutal decline in writing, to the point where your story, which once seemed lousy to me, now seems readable and quite decent, lmfao

The story is pretty good, but it feels strange. I'm used to reading all stories in the first person, so reading a story that tells everything from the third person feels weird and uncomfortable at the same time.

To be honest, no one catches my attention, but if I had to choose forcibly, I would go for DXD

It's not about criticizing you (in fact, it is), but stop making that advertising board. It's annoying and literally has more words than the story itself. In fact, I bet you that thanks to that same advertising board, a lot of people stopped reading your stories.

It's the most random trash I've read since I was born. PEAK. I don't know what else to say, so I'll just write random things. Я не говорю по-русски. 我不会说中文。 Poe 1 >>> poe 2

I'm not just giving an opinion reading the beginning of the story, but this time I will. Summarizing and from what I've read is a cliché between clichés, protagonist op from the beginning, perfect and makes women fall in love just by watching it, that doesn't mean it's bad, but if it makes it feel quite forced and coarse (if it were 2020-2022 this would certainly be a success). Unfortunately we are already in 2026 and there are already 90 stories with the same plot and the same cliché. Idk if it gets better with the chapters, but at least on my part and just reading the beginning, I drop it. Maybe I'll give it a new chance when I can't find anything to read, lol