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KEB1mthCommentedIs this going to be a thing? An ungrateful arrogant MC, that expects everything to be handed to him?
"ARE YOU SERIOUS!! A hundred thousand?? Why are you destroying my dreams! You hateful System!!"- KEB3mthReplied to Raj_Vatsal
Observe skill duh 🙄
While entering the house I observed the wards. Magic detection, dark-magic detection, Anti-apparition and blood wards powered by my magic. I really need to deal with these problems asap. - KEB1yrCommentedThe other instructor was equally astonished. "Jesus Christ! That's the fastest we ever clocked!"
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This is good at first I found it strange with the lack of it lol
Right now, I am trying to get more into dialogue since I am going to be having the MC improve himself a lot more my English has improved greatly so I feel that I am ready to begin getting more into it. So please expect it also if you see and mistakes feel free to point them out. - KEB1yrReplied to tt_g
This is a rip-off of meta essence in marvel fanfic, well he ”tries”
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It really is the best, I just wished it continued post hogwarts.
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Since the author likes a magical journey, I hope this book will sway away from the cannon plot
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Awww shucks
Alvin himself is a handsome boy, and with the awakening of his bloodline, some changes have taken place. The whole person has reached the level of handsomeness, which is only slightly inferior to the level of the legendary reader. - KEB1yrCommented
Nezu reminds me of a mix between dumbledor and the third hokage
"I was just thinking, he really did look good in that chair..." - KEB1yrCommented
Why does he have to change the future? He’s just chilling to get stronger he doesn’t have to control the plot. Not every MC of a fan-fic needs to go out of there way to control everything in the plot. He is just living his new life. It’s like with Sakumo, he only helped him because he happens to come across him in town.
Minato arrives with a squad to save Kakashi and Rin from Kirigakure ninjas. He arrives on the scene only to see a fainted Kakashi with the dead body of Rin. - KEB1yrCommentedAfter interacting with Lorne for a long time, Kyle had now learned a different way of speaking. He would always put the blame on his opponent, making it impossible for his opponent to defend themselves against him.
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I like this origin his beginning and life is the story lol
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The bloodline system ?????
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Nice.
SPD: 69 - KEB1yrCommented"My name is Maximus Decimus Meridius…" Aion said.
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Not really, most novels like this one always have the MC hide themselves. At least it’s somewhat refreshing
"No." Lu Yuan's lips curled up. Since he had been reborn, how could he be a coward? When the game world invaded in the future, the humans on Earth would need a commander, a commander with both fame and strength. - KEB1yrCommented
Bruh the majority of this page is him saying he needs to eat. You don’t need to mention this stuff once again.
He eats 5 to 6 people's food. He was eating food until he became full. - KEB1yrCommented
Bruh you don’t need to explain all of this. people shower eat and sleep, we get it. Just say “after a short break he continued” or something. It’s like this on every page
Sam went back to his room after finishing his lunch. He wants to take a quick nap. He needs to recover his mental strength so he can once again start his training.