NullElement
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It was cool and all up till this point... This just seems super forced.
Sort of things you should expect at least from my experience reading it. 'Presumably, Really Old', and OP MC gets bullied and exploited by people weaker than him. 'At least at the start, can't speak about later.' Plus some minor plot holes like the MC mentally mentioning stuff about Gojo and stuff that he should not know yet, Just feels like the author let his own thoughts slip through and actually became the character there for a little while, it is a little immersion-breaking but not that bad.
I like his personality so far, there are some bits that you could improve on though like I saw someone comment on chap one when "Sora" was doing the merge with the mystic eyes that it would be better if you put it saying that he bit down on his lip drawing blood resisting to scream out in pain just to make it more real. Stuff like that just small details, But I really like it so far!
I'm sorry, but why is she obsessed with him now? wtf? need explanation this feels a little forced.