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No, it gets worse starting at 170, and degrades to even worse after that, sorry for the confusion.

If you stick it out till 170 it follows that AI mixup them well lol

I would love to give full 5 stars, but being honest there was some update instability, that aside. It is one of the best stories I have read here and would recomend it for everyone to read!. A lovely ending to the story by the way.

Thank you for this book, I am looking forward to your next work! Stay safe and strong knowing all us Kestians are with you!

Overall a decent story, very much harem and adult level reading tough if you are into that type. Alittle bit of a rushed ending, but acceptably closed the story. Keep up the good work!

Thank you!

The story had good potential, but it was ruined by the repetative paragraphs and filler battles. On top of that there are at least 50 duplicate chapters, most but not all have the chapter title changed to reflect it so that is a plus for the author. Also be aware the story was dropped not finished. Author you have a good imagination and story telling ability, but you need to expand your vocabulary or try not to drag fights on so long. They just feel like you are repeating portions of the battle the way you word it. And your repeated promise to be dedicated then within a few chapter appologizing because you had issues does not help. Tell the readers up front and not in the chapter you are having issues and the majority will understand, but the repeated promise and breaking it hurts you and the readers more than being honest.

As many times as he has done it, it is obviously word count related, not an "error". Unfortunately, this book has more and more items done just to buff word count like all of the fights recently for his mother.

Overall a decent weak to strong world building story focused on improving modern technology to future. I would give the ending a decent rating, but have liked to see more hehe. Overall I would recomend this book to others if interested in this genre type. Thank you for the work Author!

15 repeated chapters reported them. Dropping this since author does not seem to care, review submitted as well.