IlnaHers
I've only ever tried writing default novels before, I'm not used to webnovels. But I really like the story I'm working on and I hope I can translate in words how much I love them. Wish me luck!
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IlnaHers2mthCommentedHe doesn't like his career choice but he's good at it. Reminds me of my math classes in junior high.
An eruption of boisterous laughter shook the arena's walls. It didn't seem that the biggest game of the year was just a few hours away at all. And why would it? Leonel had led them to victory three times before already, this year would be no different.- IlnaHers2mthCommented
Do people always refer to other people like this ? I wouldn't want to be called by my function and my designated aptitude of it every time I'm called for something.
"Don't be like that, cap. These Four-Star Masseuses have the hands of angels!" - IlnaHers2mthCommented
Lol. I mean, I'm sorry for you. Can you change career path?
It should have been great that Leonel had such an evaluation. He too was a Five Star Professional. The trouble was that he had no interest in joining the National American Football League and becoming a Hall of Fame Quarterback. - IlnaHers2mthCommented
Oh I can see the potential of a system that dictates your life and you don't want to listen to it
When Leonel was young, like every other child at the age of three, he took a mandatory Genetic Analysis Examination. Among other things, this test was meant to decide your optimal career path while weighing your benefit to society. This career path would be graded from one to five stars depending on several factors. - IlnaHers2mthReplied to Abruan
wow, THANK YOU I'm so bad at it- so quarterback is also a position in football?
Unfortunately, he and James weren't in the same class. While Leonel ranked third academically across all subjects, James was near the bottom of the barrel. If it wasn't for the fact his Gene Analysis decided that his fateful career was that of a 'Five-Star Tight End', he wouldn't be allowed to enter this building at all. - IlnaHers2mthCommented
Love the contrast between the characters
"You gotta stop chasing after this one girl. There are too many who want you." - IlnaHers2mthCommented
what does five star quatterback mean?
[Welcome future Five-Star Quarterback] - IlnaHers2mthCommented
I think it's actually minor girls doing it you know . cause they're the only ones interested . At least they're supposed to be the only ones interested. right...?
"Bah, forget that damned list." James spat. "Who knows what perverted grandma ranked a bunch of minors on their eligibility? Load of nonsense." - IlnaHers2mthCommented
obviously not over it yet
"521." Leonel muttered. - IlnaHers2mthCommented
oh.. you're so used to it poor boy.
Leonel's depressed mood didn't last for long. Soon we was smiling as though nothing had happened. - IlnaHers2mthCommented
I mean. I understand. He's got the right to at least know if he's rejected, right ?
Aina's cheeks grew several shades of red darker, almost becoming as ripe as a tomato. Her small lips trembled before she turned and ran up the steps, disappearing into the Academy halls. - IlnaHers2mthCommented
at least he's dedicated
"Stop enabling him." A fiercer friend rebutted. "Poor Aina has been getting harassed to death by him for the last four years. Get lost!" - IlnaHers2mthCommented
huh. Maybe it's because they all think you're a playboy that you haven't gotten a girlfriend yet. You know, because they think you're not serious.
In truth, if others knew he was practicing his smile, they'd think he was crazy. He was more than charming enough, was there a need to practice anymore? - IlnaHers2mthCommented
I can totally picture him
Leonel was not only tall and toned, but his frame was both lean and well-built. Despite this, he had a kind and inviting disposition. His presence made others feel comfortable. - IlnaHers2mthCommented
Let your hair grow to your neck, you'll look like a real shonen hero then. You like jumping from high places? Try jumping from high places with the feeling of the whipping wind in your hair, it's literally the best of the 'jumping high place' trope.
His skin was a tanned bronze, his short hair swept freely in the wind with its dirty blond almost amber color, and his eyes were a pale green. - IlnaHers2mthCommented
I wish we could do that. We wouldn't need to wash our clothes so often if that existed.
A UV light swept over Leonel's body. In a flash, his accumulating body odor was killed off, replaced by a neutral, refreshing scent. - IlnaHers2mthCommented
oh, I think I like this. An excentric character from the start, that's good. I like him.
"Get to school the normal way, boy!" - IlnaHers5mthCommented
That sounds less like sound points and a lot more like story exposition .. XD thanks White Beard for resuming the setting!
With all those points taken, I hope you understand that once you receive your gift, I wish the desire to become an Awakener will return." - IlnaHers5mthReplied to _chalk_
I agree with them. Why exercise painfully when you have smarts? đ nah just kidding I get the point *sighs*
Same with Kopi, he has a bony physique, appearing to be frail and sickly. - IlnaHers5mthReplied to Heavenly_Demon27
mn? I see your point, but it's not actually that Bad. Hearing it reinforces my idea of a snowy innocent, bit shy boy, actually. It fits that image. There are worse names to get used to! :D
Elder White-Beard, do you think I made the right decision?" Kopi asked as he gazed at an elderly.