NotlawMas
All of these will probably be dropped, but i need to at least start these, so i will stop thinking about them lol. Sorry in advance
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NotlawMas2yrCommented"Did you realise how you only looked at the ball the entire time?-" Aomine, realising where I'm going with this, shows a shocked pikachu face "-While people focus on the ball, Tetsuya uses his lack of presence to move around the court and pass the ball at super high speeds"- NotlawMas2yrCommented
What about a team without a GoM on it? Do like the rest of them did and go to all separate schools. Seiho would be a good choice since they were one of the “kings of tokyo” Don’t know how you plan on Shichiro playing but Seiho was known for their defense, so if he’s score heavy then it could be perfect.
B) Shichiro joins a different high school with another GoM like Aomine - NotlawMas2yrCommented
Maybe do like one more chap near this age, showing these 4 playing in some match together and then timeskip to them in junior high. Show some small improvements they’ve made and some official matches. Then might as well go ahead and hit high school. So based on your chap length may would be like 3 maybe 4 chaps and then in high school. Also describing things and details are great and appreciated just don’t focus too much on things that add anything to the story. Like for example the volleyball net set up. Just saying they Set it up at a shorter height would have been fine. Unless you were using it as an exercise in patience for a character or something. Been enjoying the story so far, this is just some suggestions and tips from an eager viewer
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Wait, he knows about this world? I didn’t think anyone knew about the titans in the wall.
Although tearing them down with colossal like Titans inside them might be difficult, Eren thought. - NotlawMas2yrCommented
Im pretty sure the weight training thing was debunked not long ago. not that big of a deal to your story though
I don't do weight training since it can stunt my growth and I don't really need it right now since I am not even Genin level. That kind of training can help me breakthrough to Chunin and Jonin. - NotlawMas2yrReplied to IAmJustBored
Vowel*
'Genjutsu huh, it is a tricky thing to learn even for me an Uchiha.' - NotlawMas2yrReplied to SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
The wiki has her listed as having dark violet eyes. Thats what i was going off of
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Kushina had purple eyes….
This book has been deleted. - NotlawMas2yrReplied to _Cedar_Ch 4 Russo’s rank exam
- NotlawMas2yrReplied to HinazukiMiku
Good call. there were several other Pokémon i forgot too.
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Thats fine lol! Thanks
Current Team: - NotlawMas2yrReplied to Buggy_The_Clown
It will end being more profitable through the system, he just hasnt been listing them very high because he wanted quick returns. i plan to sell Pokémon for more coins in the future
I sold the rest for just 100 Pokécoins a piece, meaning I made a nice 600 coins that night. I converted 300 of it into real world money and with the conversion rate being 1Pokécoin=$100, I was not sitting fairly comfortably with $30,723 and I still had 400 Pokécoins. - NotlawMas2yrReplied to Riryz
Hmmm i didn’t think about that. If i say no that kind of messes with leveling up the Pokémon through the system the way i did. Im gonna say they can go back, so if he catches a rare Pokémon but doesn’t want to keep it he could sell it through the system. And he would be able to sell Beedrill if he wanted through the system. I’ll think about it some more and give a definitive answer in a future chapter
I sold the rest for just 100 Pokécoins a piece, meaning I made a nice 600 coins that night. I converted 300 of it into real world money and with the conversion rate being 1Pokécoin=$100, I was not sitting fairly comfortably with $30,723 and I still had 400 Pokécoins. - NotlawMas2yrReplied to dewon07
Nah i didn’t know that was a thing.
Those 15 were the legit last 15 Pokémon I caught through the discord bot, as have all of the Pokémon I've gotten so far on here. - NotlawMas2yrReplied to Z6R1A
I probably won’t be able to do it justice, but i just couldn’t pass up the idea. hope you enjoy
Again like the synopsis said, this fic is HEAVILY inspired by the book I recently read "My daughter left the nest and came back an S Rank adventurer". Meaning the entire premise is going to be the same, but I'm adding slight differences as this is in the world of TBATE. - NotlawMas2yrReplied to FeatherLitePen
Honestly not impossible. Im scaling back a lot of stuff at the moment because his mudkip could have easily been 30+. The leveling works purely on 1message=a certain amount if xp. So if he constantly spammed the whole walk to Oaks lab mudkip should have been higher. I might make it more like that as this isnt supposed to be a “serious” pokemon fic. So he could just stomp people he doesnt like and live an easy life. havent decided
System= {Congratulations Jaron! Your Mudkip has reached level 100!}