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DaoistKgLzCV6dCommented?? no way they are going for an oscar
"For one, if we do make this TV film, then it won't be eligible for an Oscar. That's one of the most basic Oscar rule," Steve clarified.- DaoistKgLzCV6dReplied to _chalk_
I did think. That sounds way better tho?
No, you fucking don't. So reserve your judgment for someone who cares about it. - DaoistKgLzCV6dCommented
Bro has way too much hair, looks weird
[MC's images in paragraph comment.] - DaoistKgLzCV6dReplied to Arthur_Kitskui
common Polish L
The first one was because my dad loved that country and his family there, and the last one was for a friend. - DaoistKgLzCV7dReplied to Slayer_King_OneCh 111 Farewell
- DaoistKgLzCV7dCommented
bruh
I couldn't help but roll my eyes at her dramatic declaration. "Oi oi, don't compare me to a cheat main character right now," I retorted, my grip tightening on my sword. - DaoistKgLzCV12dReplied to SeaWada
thats cap, shes 14 when the show starts
- Take it easy. I'm just observing a certain decorum. Penetrating you without asking whenever I feel like it is too hypocritical even for me. We are allies now, after all, and, I hope, more than just acquaintances who co-operate only under the pressure of circumstances. - He explained calmly, moving closer to the girl. - DaoistKgLzCV13dCommented
First time I hear anyone mention white castle since Harold and Kumar
David walked out of his house and slowly drove towards the local White Castle at which he worked. He slowly exited the car and walked towards the restaurant. - DaoistKgLzCV14dCommented
I wish it was a little more clear when he's speaking out loud or when he's thinking. Maybe using ' instead of "?
"Cool. And not at all ominous, Elder Chen… I am certain that it will not be every Elder that will be present, but looking at my greenhorn classmates I think they got the message he wanted to send." - DaoistKgLzCV14dCommented
really hope it's this one sounds super cool
*Information Path* - DaoistKgLzCV1mthCommented
Where did he get sand from?
It hurts so bad that it is going to bruise. He was coming at me again. The second I realized I wasn't going to fall but crash onto the wall, I put my hand in my pocket, pulled out the sand, and threw it at his face. Because of the sand, the tear in my hand started to throb. - DaoistKgLzCV1mthCommented
whats this?
-Then I want the Authentication skill- I said, undeterred. - DaoistKgLzCV1mthPosted
This had potential to be pretty good. But it goes waaaaay to hard with the konoha bashing. Author turned basically all of Konoha into Danzo clones. Everyone is evil. The only people not being absolutely shit on and blamed for literally everything are the people the author personally likes and whoever he recruits for kumo lol
- DaoistKgLzCV1mthReplied to DRAVIDIAN
Yeah this fic goes hard with the konoha bashing
He simply didn't have water supply in the first place, much less a shower, but he didn't want his first friend to know about that. - DaoistKgLzCV1mthReplied to Maya_Matengele
It wasn't the confession that was cringe, it was the mc's response with the harem stuff. Anyway, can you clarify some of the time travel shenanigans for me? My assumption is that the time travel stuff works like this: Mc decides to go through with his plan, then a version of him goes through with the plan and sends the info back. If that is true, then one version of the mc would flip the notebook to the next page and see nothing, because its his job to go through with it. So then why is the mc super confused when be sees nothing on the page on the 3rd or 4th attempt or whatever it was? Wouldn't he assume first it was his job to go through with the plan and send the info back? Also, if the plan succeeded, why would the guy that succeeded go "hell yeah everything worked on, anyway let's go back in time." Why wouldn't he stay? He already succeeded. Also couldn't he abuse this way more? Like, he knows plan whatever is gonna work, so he writes in his notebook for example: Go through with the plan and then send back the answers to tomorrows test in school. Or something like that, if it works like you showed can't he exploit it endlessly? Also worth mentioning: This might have already been answered in the original, but It's been a pretty long time since I read the original. And personally I think it's the authors job to remind the reader of things so you don't have to read the whole thing again just to understand what's going on.
detailThe Lost Paradise: The Coming of the God of Death from the UnderworldAnime & Comics · Maya_Matengele - DaoistKgLzCV1mthPosted
3 things I don't like. 1. Mc is way too Gary stu. He is perfect, the best at everything and everyone loves him. 2. The time travel stuff at the beginning was so bad, time travel almost never makes sense in fiction and has plenty of paradoxes and it's the same here. 3. I had to drop it at ch22 where I died of cringe after he got confessed to and his response went something like "I love u too but I need a harem bro please" (I can't remember the exact words cux I've already repressed the memory)
detailThe Lost Paradise: The Coming of the God of Death from the UnderworldAnime & Comics · Maya_Matengele - DaoistKgLzCV1mthCommented
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