Little_Sparrow_2490

story and everything is good but OMG author loves to copy paste a lot there are time the entire chapter is either copy paste from before or extremely unnecessary detail on some random matters , in general when you decide to read this be ready to skip at least 60% of the text you see

extremely weird romance tbh, i enjoy almost everything else, although killing a bond feels like a bit too much and him leaving everyone behind when this far his strongest attribute been the upgrading of troops i Don't know how will it be from here

lol , i have the same problem

holy shit it's bad i liked the idea and since there was no harem tag i gave it a chance but Chinese female only so harem and omg author seems to let his or her opinion in too much , too much racism in 100 chaps i read , no side character who is not just typical guy who comes and says kneel and then gets one shoted or girls who Wana fuck him

hahaha got ya

who was he I forgot . is he the one with that attack cultivation ?

why Jeffrey ???

one was ra who was the other one ? i forgot , was the tree one ? xD

I'm at chapter 570 over all I'm enjoying this novel my biggest problem and only thing that i think will ruin this for you if you're sensitive about world building is authors's sense of distance , like at this point of story area covered by one city is huge and there are a lot of other city in this area what happened to them ? area is crossing border of another country what happenes to that ? it's as author don't care about world size/distance making sense and just throw random big numbers to be WOW that is big

aaaa then one more level and jack gets it . thanks for answer